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Apple vs. FBI

In the society we live in, our digital information is everything, and it’s all on our phones. It can tell someone who we are, what we have, where we are, and where we’re going. So, if I told you to give a stranger your phone right this moment so that the government could look at all of your information, would you do it? In a time where government mistrust is arguably at an all-time high, I doubt many people would. But what if that stranger didn’t even give your phone to the government? What if they kept all of your information for themselves? This seems improbable to ever happen right, you would never give up our phone like this? Well, the reality is, this could happen, and you may not have a choice in the matter.

This is a time where nearly all of our information is tied to our phones, and most people protect that information as best they can. There’s a reason people freak out when they lose their phone. Nobody I know would willingly give it up, but the FBI might give us no choice. They want Apple to create a ‘backdoor’ into the iPhones that so many people use today, for a reason they claim to be true, but it is one that is questionable when put under examination. What the FBI wants would effectively release most of the world’s population’s data into the wild. Data that would be ripe for the picking for anyone who has the knowledge to access it, and the ramifications would be catastrophic.

In late 2015, Syed Rizwan Farook and his wife Tashfeen Malik killed 14 people and injured 22 more in a shooting that took place in San Bernardino, California. The day after the shooting occurred, the FBI searched the home of the couple and recovered an iPhone 5c running iOS 9, this phone was secured with a 4 digit pin number. This pin number is perhaps one of the most basic forms of encryption, or “a mathematical algorithm to scramble electronic messages”. This pin was the only thing preventing the FBI from gaining access to this iPhone, which they believed to have had data that would give them information about other terrorists Syed or his wife might have been connected to. However, the iPhone in question had built in security which would erase all data on the phone after 10 incorrect attempts at guessing the passcode were made.

The FBI asked Apple to assist them with their efforts to unlock the phone, to which Apple happily complied. Apple themselves reported that for some time, they helped the FBI troubleshoot ways in which to get data off of the phone, but unfortunately the FBI made a mistake that caused Apple’s suggestions to be irrelevant. It was at this point that the FBI asked Apple to create a new version of the iOS 9 operating system in which the FBI could bypass security and therefore gain access to all of the data contained on the phone.

Apple reportedly discussed this possibility for an extended period of time before they came to the conclusion that this was a terrible idea. They weren’t concerned with the possibility of whether or not what the FBI was suggesting was possible, but were deeply worried about the possible ramifications such a software would have on the world. As Apple CEO Tim Cook explains,

“In the wrong hands, this software – which does not exist today – would have the potential to unlock any iPhone in someone’s physical possession”.

To Apple and many others, including myself, this is simply too high of a price to pay for data that may or may not contain information that could link Syed Farook and his wife to other terrorist organizations.

The FBI however, sees this differently. They don’t care whether there is a chance, no matter how high, that the information on the phone is useless. If there is even a sliver of a chance, they are willing to accept the consequences of obtaining the information, and this is a huge problem. The FBI basically outright refuses to listen to the logical reasoning of those who disagree, and some think that this might be a conscious effort on the FBI’s part to cover up ulterior motives. This, among other factors, has led numerous others to question whether the FBI and other government agencies can be trusted in this matter.

One of the major arguments made against the FBI is that they aren’t going to do what they are promising they will. The FBI claims that they wish to use this new operating system, which again, hasn’t yet been created, on only the one iPhone in the San Bernardino case. FBI Director James Comey says, “We simply want the chance, with a search warrant, to try to guess the terrorist’s passcode without the phone essentially self-destructing and without it taking a decade to guess correctly”. That sounds good on paper, but at the same time it is very hard to believe. I find it difficult to accept that the FBI would effectively ‘throw away’ this invaluable technology after only one use. The access this software would give the FBI and more generally, all law enforcement across the United States would no doubt help them immensely in solving crimes and perhaps preventing them. However, far too much access will be gained, more than anyone should have, including government agencies.

Everyone, especially after the past few years, has most likely heard about the NSA. After the Edward Snowden incident, in which he leaked secret government information about how they were listening in on our phone calls and recording our data, do you really want the NSA to have access to a backdoor leading to ALL of your information? The NSA is like the FBI, there is no chance that they would pass up on software that gives them access of this degree. Just ask Michael Hayden, Former Director of the NSA, “When you put a backdoor into everything, as the former Director of the NSA, I’m going ‘thank you Lord. Because even though that backdoor is not intended for me, and even though it might be really well constructed, and even though it may take me a long time, good intelligence services have now been given one additional potential entryway into your data and mine”.

Apple Backdoor

These intelligence services aren’t restricted to domestic agencies either. I’ll let Aziz Gilani, current partner at Mercury Fund with 15 years of software and internet experience explain, “Once Apple implements a backdoor to the iPhone, foreign governments will also demand access to encrypted information on their seized iPhones. Even if you completely trust the U.S. government, how do you feel about the Chinese, Russian, Iranian, or Syrian governments having the power to access encrypted data from their citizens?”. Obviously this is a less than optimal situation, giving these governments the power to access their respective population’s information is likely more harmful than if our government had this power. As it is, the U.S government having this power is a situation that should be avoided. So ask yourself this, does this really seem like security is being heightened when encryption is weakened?

You could argue that this is all speculation, but there’s no denying the fact that there are hundreds of phones across the nation that law enforcement agencies want Apple to unlock. How can the FBI say that this new operating system will only be used on one phone when that is clearly not true? If Apple unlocks this iPhone for the FBI, then there is no doubt that a precedent will be set. After Apple unlocks Farook’s phone, what stops other law enforcement agencies from getting Apple to do the same? John Oliver from Last Week Tonight refers to this precedent as “opening Pandora’s Box”, even if the new software was kept in the hands of Apple and nobody else got a hold of it, how can they say no to any other agency after complying with the FBI?

Even in light of all of this, there are still those who say that this new software could be written to work on only one iPhone, more specifically Syed Farook’s iPhone. However, this is simply untrue. Tim Cook who has far more expertise, knowledge, and experience in this field than most others, warns consumers, “Once created, the technique could be used over and over again, on any number of devices”. Security technologist Bruce Schneier agrees, writing “the hacked software the court and the FBI wants Apple to provide would be general. It would work on any phone of the same model. It has to”. The general consensus among technology experts seems to be that if this software were created, there is a very slim chance it would be utilized only once.

Even if the FBI only used this technology once, there is no guarantee that the software would remain solely in the hands of Apple. In a letter to Apple customers on this controversy, Apple explains,

“Of course, Apple would do our best to protect that key, but in a world where all of our data is under constant threat, it would be relentlessly attacked by hackers and cybercriminals. As recent attacks on the IRS systems and countless other data breaches have shown, no one is immune to cyberattacks”.

Political cartoon for Los Angeles Sentinel
Political cartoon for Los Angeles Sentinel

This relentless attacking by hackers would no doubt end with someone obtaining the master key to all iPhones, which shouldn’t be in the hands of the government much less a random hacker. It would only be a matter of time before our information and important data would be at the fingertips of criminals looking to exploit it, and this isn’t even the half of it. According to Ira Kalb, Assistant Professor of Clinical Marketing at the University of Southern California, “government officials and company executives around the world use the iPhone simply because it has better encryption than other choices. Once the encryption is decoded, could that compromise our security more and expose companies to more industrial espionage?”. Points like these are those that the FBI seems to be outright refusing to acknowledge, by opening a backdoor to all iPhones we could be doing more damage to our security than good, all while reducing privacy to a minimum.

Another major point that a lot of people seem to not understand is just how much information is connected to our phones. This controversy is so important because of what we stand to lose. Our phones don’t just contain our pictures, texts, etc. Off the top of my head I can think of a few operations we use our phones for that could seriously put us at risk in different ways if the wrong person had access. For example, our phones are connected to our bank accounts, emails that could contain secrets about government or corporate business that might prove catastrophic to those entities, or even home security systems that could be exploited. Nowadays your location is even tracked by your phone. However, the implications of a backdoor don’t stop at individuals’ information. Utilizing the new operating system, hackers could even gain access to the power grid,

“Think about something that happens to the infrastructure, where there’s a power-grid issue. Think about the people who are on a medical device that depends on electricity … these aren’t fantasy things by any means”. – Tim Cook

It isn’t only our digital wellbeing that is at risk, there is so much more on the line than most people realize, including the FBI.

Weakening encryption on phones and devices in general makes us highly more susceptible to all of these things and more, yet some continue to relentlessly push for ‘increased security’. What these people fail to understand is that there isn’t an indirect correlation between encryption and security. If one increases, the other doesn’t necessarily decrease. In reality, if encryption is weakened, security will likely decrease as a result. However, agencies such as the FBI only seem to think of security in the immediate sense instead of in the long term. Thwarting a terrorist today by utilizing the backdoor might stop one threat, but countless other threats will be created in the process. It is a terrible trade to make. The FBI simply does not know what it is talking about, Tim Cook does, “Then you’re back where you started “if the new operating system is released), except worse off, because everybody else’s crypto is now more vulnerable, with their data ripe for the pillaging. You’re only punishing the good guys”.

In addition to all of these implications, our economy could possibly take a hit. It is highly imperative that American companies remain competitive in foreign markets, both for “economic growth and nation security”.

“The U.S. economy will not grow if it is unable to protect its assets” – CNN

Competitiveness isn’t the only factor here though, if a backdoor is created then American companies will become susceptible to hackers too, and they could lose vital data that aids American economic growth.

Presented with all of this information, there are even those in the government who are strongly against drastically decreasing encryption in favor of ‘heightened security’, especially in this way. In fact, the majority of the government has voted for increased encryption and decreased surveillance multiple times in the recent past.

No 'Backdoors' Bill

For those who aren’t familiar with the term, circumvent means ‘to find a way around’. Meaning that this bill was proposed in order to “restrict law enforcement’s ability to find a way around encryption”. The fact that this bill was even proposed is highly significant, showing that law enforcement isn’t 100 percent backed, blindly, by the government. What is even more significant is that this bill passed with an overwhelming majority vote in the House, and later went on to be signed into law by President Obama. There was barely any divide between the Democrats and Republicans either, which we all know rarely happens. As can be seen, both parties were largely in favor of this bill, which holds great value, especially because this bill was approved only 2 years ago.

With the current controversy this bill shows that the majority of the government is in favor of protecting our privacy and information, which largely takes away from the FBI’s credibility in this matter, as they aren’t supported by the majority of the government they work for. One of the FBI’s major talking points is how our national security is at risk with heightened encryption, but one of Congress’s largest responsibilities is to protect the population through legislation, and this bill shows that they strongly disagree with the FBI. But this isn’t the only piece of legislation that demonstrates this point.

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The USA Freedom Act is even more recent than the ‘No Backdoors Bill’, being only a year old. Slightly differing from the aforementioned bill, this Act sought to limit government surveillance, which is one of the greatest threats posed by radically decreasing encryption through the use of a backdoor. Our right to privacy is not one that should be taken lightly, and the software that the FBI wants Apple to create could be perhaps one of the greatest breaches of privacy ever imagined. No doubt it was influenced by the Edward Snowden incident, which greatly reduced the public’s trust in the government. Much like the ‘No Backdoors Bill’, this Act won in the house with overwhelming numbers, 338 yea to 88 nay. After winning in the house, this legislation went onto win a majority vote in the senate as well, with a tally of 67 yea to 32 nay. Also like the previously mentioned bill, the fact that this Act is very recent helps to show where the government stands currently on this matter. Some congressmen and politicians have even taken time to speak out against decreasing encryption individually.

Last year, U.S. Representatives Will Hurd and Ted Lieu wrote a letter to the Director of the FBI, expressing their lack of approval for the actions the FBI wanted to take. They wrote, “We strongly, but respectfully, disagree with the FBI’s proposal to force privacy sector companies to weaken the security of their products and services. As computer science majors… we strongly urge the FBI to find alternative ways of addressing the challenges posed by new technologies”. In case you were wondering why they should be believed as opposed to the FBI, it is because as they mention, they have computer science degrees. They understand that this carries weight, and they also understand that the FBI have near to no credibility in this entire controversy. These Representatives no doubt worded what they said carefully, knowing that they would automatically have the upper hand when it comes to who the reader believes, and they want the FBI to know it.

These two Congressmen go on to reinforce one of the major points made in this entire controversy. This being that if the FBI uses this software, then hackers can too,

“the same backdoor that lets in FBI agents can be used by hackers too”.

These two Congressmen aren’t the only government officials speaking out individually however. Senator Lindsey Graham, at the beginning of this controversy, was entirely set on the idea of decreasing encryption and gaining access to the iPhone found at the home of Syed Farook. But after a simple briefing by technology experts on the facts surrounding the matter, the senator pulled a complete 180. He later went on to speak out against creating a backdoor and argued that it would have a negative impact on our world. Even former NSA Director Michael Hayden, whom I mentioned earlier, doesn’t find truth in what the FBI is trying to say. He explains that, “My point is, American security, on balance, is better served with unbreakable encryption”. This is coming from a man who used to run the agency that would almost definitely use a backdoor the most. The FBI and NSA both seem to believe that American security is tighter with little to no encryption, but if the Former Director of the NSA goes directly against those beliefs, how can you help but question them?

At numerous points throughout this article, I have called into question whether or not we can trust the FBI and their motives. Most of the things they say turn out to be either outright untrue, or empty statements without any factual backing. One of the best examples of this is seen in a letter that FBI Director James Comey wrote to the public regarding this controversy. Throughout the letter it is apparent that the FBI have no facts to back up their claims. In fact, most of the letter is comprised of plays at tugging on the readers emotions. This is all an obvious attempt to gain the sympathy of the reader and gather support for the FBI’s views.

For example, Comey states, “So I hope folks will remember what terrorists did to innocent Americans at a San Bernardino office gathering and why the FBI simply must do all we can under the law to investigate that”. He words it as though you are a terrible person if you don’t ‘remember’ what terrorists did in this incident. He further tries to guilt trip the reader by saying,

“Maybe the phone holds the clue to finding more terrorists. Maybe it doesn’t. But we can’t look the survivors in the eye, or ourselves in the mirror, if we don’t follow this lead”.

All this statement does is put on display the shortsightedness of the FBI. Comey first acknowledges that there is a possibility that the phone contains nothing, but then continues to explain that no matter what they have to crack the phone regardless. He shows how the FBI are fixed on only this case, and not the overall wellbeing of the American people, or for that matter, the world.

This could all indicate that the FBI is simply attempting to use this case as a base to jump off of in order to get legislation passed. Legislation that would give law enforcement free range and access to our phones, similar to the access they now enjoy to our homes (provided they have a search warrant). Further evidence to support this is shown through the past attempts that have been made to do so.

Clipper Chip

For decades law enforcement has been trying to access our phones, as can be seen by their attempt at putting a device called the “Clipper Chip” into service. This chip was designed to be placed in telephone handsets, and “would encrypt digital communications while allowing the government to keep a key”. The Clipper Chip posed many of the same ramifications that we could be facing in the near future, such as American technology products not looking appealing to foreign consumers, and it was shot down for reasons such as this.

So if we didn’t think it was a good idea then, why should we think it is now when it is on a much larger and more terrifying scale? The fact is we shouldn’t, but the FBI is trying to convince us of the opposite. Law enforcement has been looking for ways to get into our phones for years, and they might have seen their opportunity in the San Bernardino case and taken it.

No matter what the FBI’s true motives are, many still believe that finding information about terrorists worldwide by utilizing a backdoor far outweighs the negatives. However, what they don’t realize is that the FBI may not be able to retrieve the information they need. Even with access to the phones of terrorists, terrorist organizations, or everyday criminals, there are other ways to encrypt data. Representatives Will Hurd and Ted Lieu write, “terrorists trying to avoid the FBI can easily download software tools that make their communications private anyway”. Tim Cook builds upon this, adding that

“there’s no legislating away encryption. The bad guys will remain encrypted as ever, no matter what. “The Internet doesn’t have boundaries. You can wind up getting an app from Eastern Europe or Russia or wherever, it doesn’t matter which country, just outside the United States. And that app would give you end-to-end encryption”.

Essentially, both of these statements implicate that even if the FBI can compel Apple to create the software they desire, it will be useless to the FBI. While it is true that the FBI would be able to access Farook’s phone, terrorists worldwide would learn quickly and encrypt themselves through other methods. This means that in the end, no real progress will have been made and everyone else will be worse off in the meantime.

In the society we live in, our phones are a part of us, and we need to protect them and the information they carry as much as we need to protect ourselves. The two go hand in hand. We have a right to privacy, and even more so than that we have the right to protect ourselves. If the FBI is able to force Apple to create an operating system that renders our encryption utterly useless, we lose both of those rights, and stand to lose much more. Decreasing encryption is not going to increase security. It may help to protect against one physical threat, but the damage it will cause to our infrastructure will be enormous. The FBI needs to realize this and put aside their aspirations of increased surveillance for the good of not only the American people, but also the world.

 

 

 

 

 

Unit One Huffington Post Article

Food, Feed, and Failure: The Shortcomings of the Food Industry

Michael Banks- June 6, 2016Food IndustryFoodborne illnesses pose perhaps the greatest immediate threat to the average consumer. It’s estimated that every year in the United States there are “76 million illnesses, 325,000 hospitalizations, and 5,000 deaths” all due to foodborne disease. Marion Nestle, Professor of Nutrition, Food Studies, and Public Health at New York University, even comments in her book, Resisting Food Safety, on how “such numbers undoubtedly underestimate the extent of the problem”. With astounding numbers such as these one might think that everything humanly possible is being done to prevent foodborne illness. Unfortunately, this isn’t true, and that responsibility has been thrust upon us, the consumer.

There is a multitude of government agencies assigned to protect food industry consumers such as the FDA and USDA, but an overall lack of organization and concern for consumer health has put us at risk. The consumer has been at the mercy of industrialized food for nearly a century and it is worse now than ever. It is up to the consumer to enact change and revolutionize the food industry.

Let’s start at the beginning. The root of the problem are foodborne illnesses themselves, so what are these illnesses and where do they come from?

Odds are the average consumer has heard of at least 1 foodborne illness. Some of the most common foodborne illnesses include Salmonella and E.coli, with Mad Cow Disease also being a serious threat. Not all foodborne illnesses are the same however. For example, contracting E.coli can lead to death while salmonella will likely make you experience stomach pains. In addition, Salmonella can cause arthritis, a far step from stomach pains, but thankfully it takes thousands of salmonella microbes in order for it to take hold in someone. Mad Cow Disease often remains among cows, but on occasion humans can contract a special form of it, which is fatal. People usually don’t think twice about what could be in their food, or figure that if there is something in what they’re eating then all they will experience are some slight pains. What many don’t realize and what they should be clearly made aware of are exactly what risks they’re taking when they take a bite of their favorite food.

Perhaps the most dangerous foodborne illness that we face currently is a specific strain of E.coli, strain O157-H7. This strain has been known to be especially deadly and is more common than Mad Cow Disease, making it a top contender for first place in a list of foodborne illnesses you really don’t want to get. Like salmonella, E.coli (including the strain O157-H7) is a bacteria which works its way into our bodies by infecting the food we eat. Nestle explains what makes O157-H7 so dangerous.

…at some point, it picked up a Shigella gene for a toxin that destroys red blood cells and induces a syndrome of bloody diarrhea, kidney failure, and death. This toxin is especially damaging to young children” (Pg.41)

Much to our misfortune, Nestle is telling the truth. Barbara Kowalcyk, current foodborne illness prevention advocate, lost her 2 ½ year old son Kevin suddenly to E.coli O157-H7 after he ate a cooked hamburger infected with the strain. In Food Inc. we see home videos of the family vacation Kevin and his family were on. They were having fun, playing on the beach and laughing, most likely looking forward to having a family meal together later that day. They weren’t worried about whether or not their food was going to kill them, and they shouldn’t have to.  Much like the Kowalyck family most likely believed, most of the population might think that simply cooking the hamburger would kill any bacteria or viruses infecting meat. However, O157-H7 is extremely resilient, adding to its tenacity. Tragically, the Kowalyck family found this out the hard way. O157-H7 “resists heat…resists drying, can survive short exposure to acid and sometimes resists radiation and antibiotics”. Perhaps most concerning is the fact that is takes as little as fifty O517-H7 microbes to induce symptoms, noted by Nestle as “a minuscule number in bacterial terms”.

The most effective method to stopping the flow of anything is at the source. No infected animals means no infected meat which in turn means no infected consumers, so where is the source? In this case, the source is where the animals are raised and fed, feedlots.

Feedlots can be anything from enormous plots of land where thousands of cattle are held to long ‘houses’ filled to capacity with chickens or pigs. In either case, the conditions are prime for infestation. While in these feedlots, animals are forced to remain in very close proximity to each other, almost tripping over one another. Due to there being little to no space to move, animals are forced to stand in both their own and other animals’ manure for nearly the entirety of the time they spend in these feedlots. Respected food politics expert Michael Pollan, author of The Omnivore’s Dilemma, explains in the Emmy winning documentary Food Inc. what this means in simple terms, “Manure gets in meat”. As it turns out, E.coli O157-H7 is transferred through feces, meaning that one infected animal can infect multitudes of other animals.

An average feedlot, bursting at the seams with cattle

As an example of how easy this makes it for consumers to come in contact with infected meat, consider this. “Americans consume 200 pounds of meat per year/per person”, and according to health officials, “…just one infected beef carcass is sufficient to contaminate 8 tons of ground beef”! It isn’t even necessary to consume meat that’s tainted with E.coli, all it takes is contact, direct or indirect, with infected feces. It could be as simple as shaking the hand of “infected people who shed it in their feces and pass it along from unwashed hands. This makes it very important that consumers cook their meat as thoroughly as they can and that they wash their hands regularly, especially after handling meat.

Some however, such as strong industrial farming advocate Blake Hurst, directly contrast Pollan on many points. One such contrast is Hurst’s opinion that keeping animals caged is in fact the better option. Hurst himself is an industrial farmer out of Missouri and the President of the Board of Directors for the Missouri Farm Bureau. He argues that free range animals such as chickens and pigs will “increase the price of food, using more energy and water to produce the extra grain required for the same amount of meat” (Pg. 5). He may well be right, the price of food may increase, but so will our safety. Don’t you think that Kevin’s family would pay any amount of money if only the food he was eating would’ve been safe? If anything, Hurst’s reasoning simply helps to expose that industrial farming is all about getting it done cheaper and faster. In an interview with Frontline, Michael Pollan Discusses feedlots further. He recounts a personal experience he had in which he visited feedlots in Kansas. Pollan sums up his opinion of the feedlot, calling them in general “medieval cities… because they are cities in the days before modern sanitation”.

What makes matters worse is that the feed industrial farmers are feeding their cattle increases E.coli found in cows. In today’s industrial farming world, cattle are fed a primarily corn based diet. In fact, corn, in conjunction with soybeans, makes up 70% to 90% of most commercial animal feed. In Food Inc. an expert points out that if grass is fed to cattle for just a few days, replacing the corn heavy diet, then the cattle will shed 80% of E.coli in their gut. Farmers feed these foods to their cattle in order rapidly increase the growth of the animal in question, in this case cattle. The name of the game in today’s food industry is to turn out as much as you can as fast as you can for as cheap as you can do it.

The situation is indeed dire, but not only because foodborne illnesses are such a great threat. What makes this predicament even more dangerous is the lack of government action when it comes to protecting the consumer. In the government’s defense however, the system has become extremely complicated, even though it has been of their own doing. In today’s system, there are 12 different government agencies housed in six separate cabinet-level departments. The most recognizable agencies of the group are perhaps the FDA, or Food and Drug Administration, and the USDA, or the U.S. Department of Agriculture. Even just between these two agencies nothing is simple. For example, the USDA regulates pizza with meat toppings while the FDA regulates cheese pizza. That means that if you get a half pepperoni half cheese pizza you are involving at least two government agencies in your meal. This illustrates how even the simplest of things become more complicated with the ‘system’ that’s been put in place.

Where the real issues take place however are in the detection and resolution of food related issues. Earlier I offered some statistics on the number of hospitalizations, illnesses, and deaths related to foodborne illnesses. Those numbers seemed astronomical, but as astronomical as they were they are likely underestimated. This is because both the USDA and FDA are tasked with too much under demanding conditions. In Marion Nestle’s Resisting Food Safety, she explains this subject in detail. For example, the USDA, every year, must inspect

“animals at 6,000 meat, poultry, and egg establishments-and 130 importers- that slaughter and process 89 million pigs, 37 million cattle, and 7 billion chickens and turkeys, not to mention 25 billion pounds of beef and 7 billion pounds of ground beef”.

In order to complete the overly demanding task of inspecting all this meat they must have countless inspectors right? Well, maybe if 7,000 inspectors is considered a countless amount. However, having 7,000 inspectors is a godsend compared to the 700 employed by the FDA. The USDA is only responsible for 20% of the food supply too, leaving the FDA with more than they could possibly handle, especially with their “minuscule” $283 million budget, which really is minuscule by government standards.

As is evident, there is a lot of room for error with regard to government inspections of food, which causes estimates of foodborne illnesses to be horrifyingly shortcoming. This may be part of the reason why these agencies are also often negligent.

Perhaps most troubling is Marion Nestle’s recounting of her observations of the FDA while working as a member of the Food Advisory Committee there for 6 years. She noticed that the FDA had an “apparent perception of food issues as troublesome and unscientific rather than as challenging problems demanding a high priority and focused attention”, and that

they often appear to be more concerned about their own turf-or that of the industries they regulate-than about protecting the health of consumers”.

This brings us to unsavory topic of corruption. In Food Inc. investigative journalist Eric Schlossor discusses how “Regulatory agencies are being controlled by the companies they are supposed to be scrutinizing”. We also see how individuals in high government positions, including positions in agencies such as the FDA, are on boards of directors for some of the 4 big beef processing companies. This would definitely explain why it seems as though the government just isn’t as invested as it should be with consumer health. It would also explain why back in 2002 the FDA, after 4 years, still had not “acted promptly” in enforcing a feed ban that prevented cattle from consuming tainted feed that would make them sick. It is this kind of routine lax behavior that is forcing us to take matters into our own hands.

We, as consumers, must make a conscious effort to enact change in the food industry. This can be accomplished by purchasing not food produced by the industry that has a revolting disregard for our own health, but from sustainable farms that produce wholesome food. Farms such as that of Joel Salatin, who believes in producing foods based on Mother Nature and who correctly points out that we have “lost integrity and accountability of all food”. By doing so, we will show both the corporations and government that we are done buying into their deceit, leaving them no choice but to change their ways. It’s time to take back our food.

Unit 1 Huffington Post Blog

Food Safety: What is best for us?

Mario Perez – June 2, 2016

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Cows living in their own manure on an industrial farm

Do you know what goes on behind the closed doors of huge food industries like Tyson? Do you know what they feed their animals? Do you know what kind of environment they put them in? The answer to these questions should be readily available to the public, but for some reason these questions remain shrouded in mystery. Thankfully experts like Michael Pollan have done some thorough research to provide us with some answers.

Over the years food politics has been debated by people who are for and against stronger government regulations. Some of these issues pertained to what is allowed in animal feed and in what ways must farmers go organic. There is no clear answer to these issues, but if we come together we can organize a call for a reform that will be the most beneficial to our health.

One of the biggest controversies that relate to food safety is the ways that government should get involved in the food industry in order to ensure our safety. Although the government already has certain regulations that companies and farmers must follow, they seem to be loosely enforced. The big question to ask yourself when thinking about this is “Do I trust the companies enough to properly regulate themselves and create proper limitations so that they can ensure their food is 100% safe for the world?” There was a time where no one ever had to think about this question, but recent investigations into the food industry, such as those done in the documentary “Food Inc.,” have forced us to rethink this question.

In the documentary Eric Schlosser stated that regulation agencies are being corrupted by people who originally took part in the food companies.  This raises the issue that the food companies may have political influence in the government. When you focus on the fact that it is very difficult to give branches of the government power to enforce food safety and the way the FDA loosely enforces regulations placed on the industry it makes this alleged influence seem very real. Ever since food safety has become a major issue to the public many steps have been taken to find a way to ensure the safety of the consumers.

Although food safety has at some points seemed to be a priority to the government it seems that many attempts to give federal agencies the power to “enforce food safety regulations have been blocked repeatedly by food producers and their supporters in Congress,” as said by Marion Nestle. Nestle’s idea is very similar to Schlosser in that they both believe that the food companies are hindering the process of giving federal agencies the power to regulate the food industry.

At one point the USDA created a feed ban that prevented “most protein derived from ruminants” from being put in feed being given to other ruminants.  A Consumers Report article wrote that a report done by the Government Accountability Office found that more than four years after the feed ban took effect, the FDA still had “not acted promptly to compel firms to keep prohibited proteins out of cattle feed and to label animal feed that cannot be fed to cattle.”  The fact that the FDA had not taken action to firmly enforce the ban after four years should raise some red flags. This raises the question, if the FDA takes that long to enforce a ban that would prevent the spreading of diseases to other animals, then do they take as long to enforce other regulations that are equally or more important?

Although there are food regulations that are loosely enforced, there are a few regulations that are heavily enforced.  For example, there is one regulation that mandates the amount of pathogens, in percentage, needed to be killed in order for the food to be considered safe to eat.  The authors in an article from Scientific American claim that these “safe” percentages are too high.  They repeatedly mention that the “food safety officials often base their policies on the so-called worst-case scenario.”  Because of this basis many of the foods we eat are overcooked and lose a lot of their flavor.  This regulation is mostly in the restaurant business so it becomes very hard for cooks to create a dish that meets these standards and are also very flavorful. Flavor is one of the most important things for us when we eat, so it is hard for a cook to create the best and safest dish possible under these regulations. However if losing flavor means being able to ensure safety from any diseases, then it should not be a huge deal.  Food that is not cooked or undercooked can easily carry a pathogen such as E. coli O157:H7, so it is best to overcook it to make sure pathogens like E. coli O157:H7 are completely killed off. Our own health should definitely be a priority over the taste of a dish because at the end of the day you can choose to eat something else if you truly do not like the way it tastes.

One other major concern that has to do with food safety is in the animal feed and the living conditions of every animal.  Recently it has become a major trend to begin to feed animals corn.  The main reason for this is best explained by Michael Pollan in Food Inc. “Corn is really cheap and makes animal fat.”  The remainder of the feed is usually some kind of processed animal protein that is made of different, unused parts of the animals and sometimes even come from sick animals.  Even though it might seem disgusting to some people, according to David Fairfield in a Consumer Reports article, processed animal protein is considered to be “very nutritional feed ingredients” and all the feed ingredients are approved by the government

Although processed animal protein might be something that is truly healthy for the animals, we are still at risk against foodborne illnesses. The entire feed can be easily contaminated by one animal that was sick or just “by simply being stored in the wrong bin.” If one small case of contaminated feed is not dealt with properly then it could easily lead to a dangerous pathogen being spread to livestock and, in turn, to products that we buy and consume. This can result in widespread disease outbreak and even deaths if the feed process is not carefully managed.  The best way to avoid any foodborne illness is to cook your food until you are positive that it is completely cooked through so that the amount of pathogens left alive are very little to none.

As one can see the concern with food safety starts at the farm. When it comes to raising animals many big industry farms use certain techniques to raise production and efficiency. “Food Inc.” does a great job at revealing what really goes on in these farms and how it affects animals.  One company farmer named Vince Edwards, who worked for Tyson, said that they make their farmers raise their chickens “in the dark all the time.”  “Food Inc.” also has videos of the real conditions that the animals live in.  The cows are kept in pens without any room to move and have their own feces piling up around them.  This kind of environment is a feeding ground for dangerous pathogens.  If one cow gets sick then there is a chance that another cow in its pen will get sick too and eventually it could infect the entire pen.  Even if one cow is sick and does not spread the disease, there is still a chance for it to be processed and cause an outbreak.  Not only are these conditions inhumane for the animals, but they are also dangerous for us.

A way to solve this problem could be to revert back to the more traditional ways of farming such as free-range.  Joe Salatin, in “Food Inc.,” says that this is the best kind of farming because it keeps nature, the animals, and us healthy.  Reverting back to old farming ways seems like the best bet, but there are still dangers that the animals must face.  Blake Hurst, an industrial farmer, wrote an article that shares a few stories that reveal these dangers. When animals such as turkeys, cows, and chickens are raised free-ranged their biggest enemies are predators in the wild and the weather.

One of the stories that Hurst provides his audience is about how his neighbor raised free-range turkeys.  These turkeys were not smart enough to take shelter when it rained so one night his neighbor “lost 4,000 turkeys to drowning, along with his dream, and his farm.” Since there are apparent dangers that come with both types of farming, it is difficult to choose which one is the best.  Although animals are still at risk when being raised free- ranged it still looks to be the best option because they are free to do what they want and maintain a healthier living style.  Healthier animals mean less pathogens, and less pathogens mean less outbreaks.

For now the best we can do is to rally together and demand a better system in place to overlook the food industry. Even if it is a long and laborious road to get there it is something that we must achieve for ourselves and future generations. While we remain in this uncertain time where a foodborne illness outbreak could be waiting around the corner, I leave you with this advice “If you are unsure if it is thoroughly cooked, cook it a little bit longer.”

Unit IV reflection

  1. In Unit I this semester I had a lot of trouble trying to working with a few articles at the same time. Trying to incorporate Food Inc., Consumer Reports, Organic Illusions, etc was very difficult to me. Trying to synthesize different texts was the hardest thing we did this semester. If the “Sort it Out” assignment was not given, I would have been extremely lost. Also learning about the writers project helped in all units. We had to find the projects of each food article and see what each author was trying to say but also when we were researching our topic for the next units, we again had to determine what each article was trying to achieve. I really enjoyed the second and third unit projects because it was about something that I was interested in. Unit I was by far the most difficult because of having to synthesis texts.

I thought a highlight of the semester was a few assignments that helped me immensely for each project. I sometimes would be extremely confused on what we were writing about or what we were doing for our final draft and there were a few assignments that made everything clear to me. The “Sort it Out” assignment for unit 1 helped me organize my thoughts. I was able to clearly determine what each project was, find similar topics being discussed in each article, and then find quotes that agreed or contradicted with the same topics.

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The “web” document for unit II helped me write out everything I wanted to address in my TED talk.

 

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Lastly, for unit III the last assignment we did in class. When we had to write list out all of your sources and label them as a secondary, primary, or scholarly source. I’m sure I was not the only one but I was very disorganized with all my sources, I had a ton of paperwork from a lot of research and never really put it down on paper the sources I was going to use so this really helped organize me.

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The challenges I faced this semester were solved a lot by organization. Organizing my thoughts and putting them down on paper especially helped me when synthesizing texts and helped me in unit I, II, and III.

 

  1. I had a term paper due two weeks ago in my sports psychology class. We needed three journal sources. My paper was on athletic injuries and MPFL reconstruction surgery. I went on the library database and almost all of my sources were from ProQuest to find scholarly journals about my topic. Without doing the research I had done in this class, I would not of even thought to use the library’s databases. The research we did in writing was different from other research I have done for classes because I would normally just have to get any source for assignments, never a specific source, a primary or secondary source. I didn’t even know the difference between the different types of sources. In writing I had to go onto databases, find databases that had my topic, select key words that would give me the information I needed, but also eliminate the articles I didn’t want. For other classes, I just go on Google and normally use the first few results.   However, because of the research done in writing, I used the databases to find journal sources for my psychology paper.

The main difference I’ve seen for different research writing situation deals with genre. This was shown with the unit II and III assignments. I used some of the same research but it was composed very differently. For my TED talk I took my research and tried to find pictures that best represented the quotes or information I was taking from a source. For unit III, I was able to keep the quotes but also have pictures if I thought it would help get the point across to readers. There was one picture of Brazilian officials spraying mosquitos in my TED talk and it was the only picture I could find. I thought it was easier to describe the picture in a TED talk versus the unit III article. In the TED talk I was able to say, “this picture shows…” and just talk like a normal conversation. In unit III, I placed the picture where I was talking about what Brazilian official are doing about Zika but it still could be unclear as to what’s happening in it.

Municipal agents spray anti Zika mosquitos chimical product at the sambadrome in Rio de Janeiro, on january 25, 2016.  Brazil is mobilizing more than 200,000 troops to go "house to house" in the battle against Zika-carrying mosquitoes, blamed for causing horrific birth defects in a major regional health scare, a report said Monday. / AFP / CHRISTOPHE SIMON        (Photo credit should read CHRISTOPHE SIMON/AFP/Getty Images)

  1. I was not as interested in Food Politics as I was with my social controversy. When we were in Unit I, I believe that we were given all the research and articles we needed to read and watch to come up with our article. Everything that needed to be included was handed to us so no research was really needed. It was completely different in Unit II and III. It was definitely a lot harder and time consuming having to get our own information but it did enhance my engagement on the topic. I would see different opinions and new information coming out about Zika that would I would find very interesting and want to learn more about. Especially being able to pick our own topic, I assume most of us picked a topic we wanted to learn about so that made us engaged when we were doing things for our topic. For unit II when we needed to complete the “Sources that matter” worksheet I was getting very annoyed of research. Having to find six different databases got very tedious. I would find a few articles from two or three databases and think those articles would good enough but having to keep looking was very annoying. Especially because I had trouble finding some databases, it was very time consuming.

I thought the first unit was the longest. It dragged on for so long and not being that interested in food politics compared to the other unit assignments, I was bored with the first unit. It was interesting at first but I got less engaged as the unit continued and got creeped out from food politics and never cooked the raw chicken I had in my freezer.

  1. I would continue with my Unit III NYT article. I can see why its weird that I want to continue working with a article that I wrote two days before the final draft was due, but I really think I could add a lot more information if I had time. I would first want to take it to the writing center but I would want to add more insight from athletes. I looked very hard for athletes from other countries opinions on the Zika crisis but I think maybe if I tried going onto websites that other countries use to see other opinions on Zika. My first draft of the essay was about how it’s not fair to women athletes because they are the ones mainly affected by Zika and question if it affects athletes from underdeveloped countries. I think if I had more time I could work that into my final idea that the public can’t try and pressure athletes or backlash them if they choose to not compete in the games. I could incorporate the idea that the public just can’t pressure female athletes to compete. Maybe if I could find fans reactions to Solo’s quote because she is very well known in America and a key component to the defending Olympic champion soccer team. I could tie their reactions into how the public can’t decide if the virus is actually dangerous or not because it’s the athletes that are sacrificing themselves and putting themselves at risk.

 

  1. I would want to show my mom my Unit III NYT magazine article. I would want to show my mom because she is a nurse in the wound care center of her hospital. My mom being a nurse and having the maternal instinct, is very careful when it comes to health issues and being protective as a mom. That’s why I want to show her this article because I want to know what she should think athletes should do. My mom loves sports and has always been a huge fan of soccer because I’ve played it all my life. I want to know her reaction after reading the quote form Solo and Musnicki. I know a part of her would be worried for their kids if they contract the virus, but the other part of her wants to see a competitive Olympic games. Because I have played soccer all my life, I would imagine my mom putting myself in one of the female athletes shoes. I would hope my mom would say to go to the Olympics because if I had the chance to compete in the Olympics for the soccer team, I would go no matter what. I respect my parent’s opinion a lot and would need full support from them to compete. I’m curious to see what my mom thinks about competing or not for a daughter of hers, an athlete she doesn’t know personally, or if it was herself. I would want my mom to say yes to all situations. Take in the information we know about Zika and what we can do to prevent it and try as best as you can to try and not contract the disease.

Unit 4 Final Reflection

Harrison Hope

Unit 4 Reflection

5/2/2016

Have you ever had a subject that you could cover in your sleep and still get an A? I have, and that subject was not and is still not writing. In high school, my 9th grade English teacher, Ms. Scoggins, was the most supportive teacher to walk the halls of Chamblee High School. Even though I struggle with articulating my thoughts and attempting to put them down on paper, you could do no wrong in the eyes of Ms. Scoggins. Ever since then I have been able to keep my head up through shitty teacher after shitty teacher until I took writing 105 last year, my first semester of my freshmen year. I barely passed the class due to earning a C minus on multiple papers. Even after visits to the writing center I could not end up on the same page as my teacher in terms of understanding the expectations I needed to meet in order to be more successful in the class. Did this leave me excited to take another writing class my sophomore year? Absolutely not. However, through successful teaching methods, fantastic workshops, and strong support this year, I have begun to look forward to doing research and putting my thoughts and work into words again.

From the get go with Unit 1, I was enthusiastic about researching food politics and watching food Inc. Although I had a strong start and participated in the workshops, the latter end of the unit was a struggle for me; not because of the class but because of poor allocation of time and resources on my end. My favorite portion of unit 1 was watching Food Inc., naturally, but not because we just got to watch TV in class but due to the fact that we had to write down expert quotes and statistics. I am an avid fan of fun facts and random knowledge so having the opportunity to expand my understanding of farming and the food industry’s effect on my everyday life was intriguing. I highly suggest doing that again from a teaching standpoint in the future if given the chance. When it came to the final paper, I rushed to get it done at the last minute which was not only a waste of my time and education but an insult to the teacher as well. In the end though I was able to both identify and apply the art of Pathos, Kairos, Logos, and Ethos along with being able to properly research and cite outside sources.

I consider myself to be a fairly sociable and outgoing so after just squeezing by in Unit 1, Unit 2 was more my piece of cake– Ted Talk Presentations. Contrary to Unit 1, I started off shaky for this unit. When we worked on the Post-It Easel Pads jotting down our topic for discussion I was clueless on what I wanted to research. Although I appreciated the workshop, it was much more helpful for me to just sit at my laptop and start researching on my own, scrolling through pages and pages of potential topics. With categories ranging from domestic violence in the NFL to political campaigns, I was finally able to settle on the topic of Bill H.R. 1013, the bill that decriminalizes marijuana. Once my issue was decided I was able to make a killer PowerPoint presentation to compliment my rehearsed Ted Talk. By mixing in some jokes with factual information, I was able to get back on track in the class by hitting the project out of the park.

Coming off of a hot streak in unit 2, I feel confident that I was able to complete unit 3 to the best of my abilities. For me, the best workshop in this unit was the Scramble draft activity. By having an unbiased proofreader put my paper in order based on how she felt it would flow best, I was able to consider different ways to piece my paragraphs together. In the end I chose to switch up the course that portions of my paper followed making it better than ever.

I have never been too confident in my writing but by the end of this class I am now much more open to constructive criticism and the perspectives of others. I enjoy the challenges brought on by this course and I hope to continue bettering my writing techniques during writing 307 next fall.

Final Reflection

Final Reflection

Before coming enrolling in this class, I considered myself a good researcher when it came to finding and breaking down sources to use them in projects. I was surprised to realize that I wasn’t going deep enough into the actual meanings of my sources and so I was missing some crucial details. Learning about the writer’s project and then learning how to find it helped me tremendously to better evaluate sources. I was able to read a little bit of each source, then I was able to find the writer’s project and then I would determine if it was useful or not. Initially it was difficult to do if I didn’t have any background knowledge on the topic. For example, in the first unit, it was hard for me to figure out what some of the writers were arguing because I wasn’t aware of the background of the topic and so I wasn’t able to specifically identify the problem at hand. This made it tougher for me to synthesize articles. Once I got used to identifying the claims, I was able to get more out of my sources. Accurately identifying the claims also gave me more terms and keywords that also aided me in my research. I thought that the “Quick-n-Dirty heuristic” was especially helpful with regard to finding new keywords and terms because it forced me to search for different things. I even tried researching things that didn’t seem important initially and I obtained a few good sources based off of those key words. I had the realization that if I can’t find any major key terms, I could still be just as successful using seemingly less important words. I no longer needed ten sources to write an article or an essay; I only needed like four of five because I could now extract more necessary and useful details. I also cut down the time it took to conduct research because I was able to cut out the time that it would normally take me to think of things to research.

When I learned about the unit two and three assignments, I already knew what I wanted to research and talk about because I already had a strong interest in the subject. I knew a lot about the topic already and I already had a stance on the issue without doing any research. In my research, my goal was to find sources that were interesting, that identified the controversy, and that backed or opposed my claim. I already liked the topic so reading about it and learning more about it was joyful to me but I knew that not everyone shared the same passion as me. The group work where we had to briefly explain our topic, and take a stance, and then have my partners share their view helped me put myself in the mind of my audience. I was also fond of the posters that we made where we put our controversy on it and then the entire class critiqued it for the same reason. I learned a lot more through research than I shared because it wasn’t as important as some of the other information. My topic was very complex so I know that there is still a lot to learn and I want to still learn about it. I want to continue to research about the future of the nuclear energy, specifically in the case of power plant designs, and I also would like to delve a little deeper into the history surrounding nuclear energy that created the misconceptions that most people mistakenly believe in today.

I would share my unit 3 piece with really anybody that was willing to listen to me. I would choose this piece because I care very deeply about the topic that I chose to write about. I put a lot of research and a lot of effort into understanding and conveying that information in a way that would make sense and be convincing to whoever was reading it. I provided several specific claims and I also provided evidence to support my claims. I would hope that after reading it, the reader would have a different outlook on nuclear energy. I strongly believe that nuclear energy is the energy of the future and I did my best to share this belief to my audience. My goal was to just encourage my audience to maintain an open mind with regard to nuclear energy because with the ongoing energy crisis that is among us today, no options should be ruled out without proper research being done first.

Final evaluation

InAe Lee

WRT 205

The first assignment in WRT 205, which was writing the Huffington Post Blog Article, was the assignment that gave me some confidence in writing. I think there was some luck for me that my major is public health and the topic was about the food safety. In my other public health classes, the major topic during this time was food safety and nutrition, so the first assignment drew my attention. However, I have never written a blog or an article, so I had to look at some blog articles and compare what differences they have with essays for classes. I personally was not a fan or writing a research paper since high school, because it requires lots of time and resources. Especially, researching on a topic that I do not have any interest on was a painful experience. However, just having a fun and personally important topic to research about was a great start for me. Also, the workshop for writing a strong ‘lead’ helped me writing a strong claim for the article. “Would you still be able to buy the product, if the company includes the image of cows being fed with parts of downer cows and thousands of chickens packed over their manures on their advertisement?” The most challenging part of researching was to find the right sources that will help me in giving information and evidence. By inviting the guest speaker, it was great to know other databases other than Google to find the sources. I found LexisNexis and Scopus pretty helpful, in terms of how organized their websites were and easier to find the sources with decent information.

Practicing how to do a good research and write a good research paper would not much affect on my career, but in terms of remaining school year and other courses, I think it would be a great skill to use. We did many workshops as a class over the semester and the most helpful workshop for me was how to write a good ‘lead’ and Evaluating Sources. As I said before, in researching, finding the appropriate sources was the most challenging part. After talking doing the Evaluating Sources workshop in class, I learned how to choose helpful sources by finding the writer’s project, Kairos, Logos, Ethos and Pathos. Just looking for those could give me if the source has enough evidence for me to use or not. Using this skill will help me a lot in the future writing and also save me up some time.

Researching on Food Politics and Political Controversies has increased my interest and understanding. Food Politic was a pretty familiar topic due to other class. However, I only watched the clip ‘Food, Inc.’ in other class but not researching and get deeper information about Food Politics. Because food is the most important requirement to stay healthy and happy, when I realized there are some dark secrets in the food industries, I was not happy. I know that my argument will not do much change to our food system, but just researching and writing about the truth made me feel like I did something. On the other hand, political controversies started out as a pretty boring topic for me, because I do not know much about politic. However, the topic I chose matter much to me since it is pretty serious in South Korea and I actually wanted to know more about North Korea by researching. This topic also made me engage a lot but more seriously than the Food Politics.

If I continue one of the topics, I would continue with the North Korea, because it is on going and most relatable topic for me. Whether they are threat or not, whether or not we are divided or united, North Korea would be the biggest concern in South Korea. Also, while I was researching I learned more information that I did not hear or read from the news.

I would like to share the UNIT II with someone outside the class, because the five minutes TED Talk is a great way to share information in a short time with key arguments. Since, I chose the topic, North Korea to hope that people in US could also learn some information about them that they did not know and possibly have some more attention, telling someone about my neighboring country will mean something to me.

 

Final Reflection

Going into this class, I was a little hesitant, not because it was a writing class, but because it was a research course. I have done a couple of research papers between high school and freshman year but I have never taken a course entirely dedicated to it. I thought that it was going to be a lot of work and I was a little nervous because I never properly learned how to research. When we started Unit I, I was ready to jump in and give it a try. I thought that the topic of Food Politics was very interesting and unlike most classes, it would be something I would not mind writing and learning about. I enjoyed watching Food Inc. in class and reading the other sources that we used in our final articles. I thought it was cool to use different mediums as research. A major thing I learned from this was that you have to take who the author is into consideration. You have to determine whether they are a credible source and if they are biased in any way. I remember coming to class one day, after our homework was to read and annotate Blake Hurst’s article, Organic Illusions. I read the article, took notes, and came to class feeling confident on my take of his article. In class, when Amy asked for our opinions of the article, all of the people she had called on had said something that was the complete opposite of what I thought. They said that he was very sarcastic and that there was no evidence to support the claims he was making. Hearing all of these things, I sank in my seat and hoped to not get called on. That class made me realize that I just read the article and believed every word he said. I did not once question where he got his information from, who he was, and whether he was a credible source or not. This, to me, is a very important lesson you need to learn when you are doing research, and I am happy that it happened in the beginning of the semester.

Next, came taking pieces from each source and trying to connect them in a clear and cohesive manner. If you think that you can just do this on your first try you are wrong. This takes a couple of tries and it helps if you are very organized with your sources. The Sorting It Out Workshop was a helpful activity that allowed us to identify the project of each piece we read/watched and pick out pieces of information that connect with each other and support the claim we are trying to make. Doing multiple drafts and peer editing really made my final post so much better and made me feel more confident about it.

Multiple challenges arose for me in Unit II. Public speaking is definitely not something I like to do or think I am good at. Also the fact that we had to pick our own topic and start our research from scratch was a little intimidating. The good part about picking our own controversies was that we each got to pick something that we are interested in and eager to learn about. The topic that I chose was heroin and addiction. This topic was a little difficult because there are many problems that are fairly recent. This made finding information from databases a little bit difficult. The class where we learned about the different databases and which ones are useful for each topic is something that is super beneficial for future research and a great thing to know in general. Learning how to specify your topic and using different phrases and keywords really helped narrow the results and led to some really good findings for my Ted Talk and NYT article. Presenting my Ted Talk was probably the biggest challenge I faced in this course. I hate talking in front of people and presenting things, but I know that each time I do it makes it easier for the future. What also helped me give my talk was that I was really confident with the research I found and the claim I was making.

I truly learned a lot about heroin and addiction between Units II and III. Heroin is an up and coming issue for society today and some of the information I came across was frightening. The fact that there was a 286 percent increase in heroin-overdose related deaths from 2002-20013 was mind blowing to me. It was also very interesting to learn about the background behind heroin addiction and how it is so popular because people are initially addicted to prescription painkillers but then make the shift to heroin because it is a cheaper and very similar high. What I learned from these assignments made me want to continue learning about the topic and share what that knowledge with others. I am very proud of my NYT Article for Unit III and would choose to share that with people outside of class. Not only was this article a highlight of the semester, but also it made me realize how important it is to educate people on serious topics going on today. If enough people know about the dangers of heroin and addiction, it is possible for society to find a way to control and hopefully put a stop to it.

Each unit of this course presented some challenges I had to overcome, but in the end I think I was really happy and actually surprised with my final pieces. I learned a lot from this course about how and where to look for research and how to write for a specific genre and audience. I will take away many things from WRT 205 that will make my future assignments much easier.

 

Final Reflection

From the very beginning of the semester I was curious to see what direction the class would take. I think the most memorable unit of the semester would have to be unit I. I noticed that Unit II took a more personal turn for me and this is what made me more interested in the class. I always find that personal topics lead me to be more engaged. A highlight for me was definitely the Ted Talk. I felt like it was important to give my Ted Talk on mass incarceration because it is something that is often overlooked. Most people trust the judicial systems ruling of “criminals” but I do not especially when it comes to sentencings that involve African-Americans. I don’t want to sound like a conspiracy theorist, but I do believe that the government does sometimes associate negative depictions with African Americans. We see this with the basic stereotypes of the brute, Aunt Jemima, and the infamous welfare queen, a term started by former president Ronald Reagan. That escalated into associating African Americans and Latino’s, but mostly African American with crack-cocaine in America. We often see in the media that African Americans are not granted justice. Let’s not forget Trayvon Martin, Eric Garner, Sean Bell and even Emmett Till (1941).

Choosing to research mass incarceration was challenging and shocking at the same time. Most of the primary research I found was statistics. One stat that really struck me was “African Americans now constitute nearly 1 million of the total 2.3 million incarcerated population.” How could this even be possible, but I believe I found the answer to that question when I learned that former Nixon domestic policy chief, John Ehrlichman, said that “the war on drugs was created as a political tool to fight blacks and hippies”. How is our government to be trusted?

 

The only other class that I am required to do research for at the moment is my English Textual Studies class for our final paper. He is not requiring us to do as much research as we did for this class, but overall the class has helped refresh some of my research skills. Everything I have been required to do in the class as far as research is something I have done before.

 

The food politics unit definitely opened my eyes to plenty of things. It has affected me so much that I even threw away the Tyson frozen chicken breasts I had in my freezer. I realized that the taste was artificial and I just could not fight it anymore. I find myself always examining the color, size, taste, and smell of my foods especially from the specific industries that were discussed in the movie. Looking at certain foods now even make me nauseous because of the thoughts that run in the back of my mind. I was also shocked to learn how many of the owners of these companies have some sort of relation to the government. Again, how is our government to be trusted? I am sure they are aware of what these producers are doing, how they are recruiting illegal immigrants and how dangerous working in slaughter houses is. As long as they receive a percentage of the profit they will continue to turn a blind eye. My social controversy justified my thoughts about the United States government, this institution is not designed to protect people of color, especially African Americans. There will always be a law or institution put into place to limit the opportunities and freedom of blacks. Some succeed don’t get me wrong, but that number does not compare to the many successful whites. It was also shocking to learn that more whites are using illicit drugs, while more blacks are arrested on drug charges. I think too many ignored to comments made my former Nixon aide John Ehrlichman. If he admits that the war on drugs was a tool to target minorities, why isn’t anyone listening?

If I could continue to work on any piece, it would definitely be my mass incarceration piece because everyone needs to be aware of the society we live in. We live in a country where Presidents can openly target specific groups of people. We live in a country where African Americans are less likely to finish high school, go to college or even succeed in life overall. We live in a country where Presidents fund prisons, which creates the space for more people to be behind bars. Many of these politicians we vote for own private prisons and make money off of working citizens and criminals being in there. I’m not entirely sure what I would do with the piece this topic requires a lot of research and I only focused on certain things there is way more to be found. One option would be to turn it into a book, but who would read it? I can’t think of a creative way to get the message across.

If I could share any piece it would be my TED Talk on mass incarceration because it is something of interest to me and I am curious to see how others would react. Based off of the comments that I received after I presented the TED Talk many were unaware of the issue so I am sure that others are unaware of this as well. I would expect outsiders to be shocked because I was even shocked at what I discovered. I would not just want to share it with one person I guess I would share it with a group of my friends first because those are the people I am usually around. I’m sure they would feel the same way that I do we are all socially conscious and stay up to date on current issues especially those surrounding people of color.

Unit 3 Reflection

[1] The title focuses the readers attention very will. The lede was thought provoking and forced the reader to continue reading to find out the answer for themselves. Yes, it asks the reader to think about how girls are constantly taken out of the classroom for something as silly as clothing and how this has directly effected society as a whole and acceptance.

[2]  The introductory section of the article invites the reader in really well. It forces the reader to not only look at the positive things schools teach our children but also the underlying negative things that are being taught without our full knowledge. It looks at how dress codes are often ‘sugar coated’ by schools in order to look like a positive thing. However, the more cases and scenarios you look at, the more the reader can see just how much of a problem dress codes are and how they directly influence sexism and rape culture.

[3] The writer offers up a strong idea and proof throughout the article. I show multiple scenarios where girls are being overly sexualized as well as multiple instances where schools blatantly say that boys education are more valued than a girls. I think the case that refers to the transgender community might not have been immediately obvious to readers and solidifies the point that it really is for the benefit of a boys education rather than helping girls.

[4] The writer shows clarity of thought really well. Everything within the article is organized around a central theme to prove a point. It’s also presented in such a way that the examples are used to make the biggest point as well as a statistic.

[5] The writer does this really well by acknowledging both sides of the argument. For example, I talked about how schools claim that the point of dress codes are to create a distraction free learning environment, but then I show multiple examples where schools are more focused on boys learning than girls. I organized material really well, first summarizing the topic, then picking out multiple examples and talking about organizations that are in agreement with this movement as well as looking at other groups that are directly effected in order to avoid over generalizations.

[6] I used over 12 sources in order to fully research this controversy. I developed a persuasive stance by using so many examples where women are directly being targeted by sexist school dress codes. I utilized my research by using accurate statistics to make my point as well as the many examples I was able to find.

[7] I exceeded research expectations and assignment requirements. I used 11 secondary sources, 5 visual sources, as well as a primary research site.

[8] I integrated secondary sources effectively by summarizing them as well as using pictures in order to make the topic more relatedly and deepen the analysis. The primary sources was used to find statistics as well as more information and background on rape culture and sexual assault, which is mentioned throughout the article as my main argument.

[9] I persuaded the audience to consider my claims by using so many examples as well as citing multiple agencies that are trying to fight for my main argument which is rape culture and sexism. I think my use of rhetorical tools was strong. I was able to pull on emotions by talking about sexual assault and the numbers surrounding it’s victims as well as logic by looking at examples to prove my point.

[10] I think the visuals I selected were appropriate as well as revealing. All of the visuals used were of the victims to pull on the readers emotions and logic as well as photos showing the large support by outside organizations. I also used a visual with the statistics surrounding sexual assault. I placed the visual strategicially to line up with each story so that the reader could easily make a connection between the visual and the evidence. Yes the visuals contribute in a meaningful way, without them I don’t think the reader would feel as invested in the topic.

[11] I don’t think I did this very well since I was not in class in order to get in peer editing or teacher comments. However, I did reach out to multiple friends and family in order to get feedback to make sure my article was well written.

[12] I used hyperlinks effectively. They were always appropriate, often used to cite a source in case a reader wanted more information on the topic or story I was referring to. I believe it gave me more credibility.

[13] I went through my article several times as well as had family and friends look over it to check for grammar and appropriate style. I believe that my sentence issues being credibility on the issues by using hyperlinks as well as simple summarizations.