The Nightmares of Sexual Assault

Was it her fault? Was she to blame? Why didn’t she speak up?

The Syracuse student section cheer on the Orange Syracuse's in second half action at the Carrier Dome. Dennis Nett/The Post-Standard
The Syracuse student section cheer on the Orange Syracuse’s in second half action at the Carrier Dome. Dennis Nett/The Post-Standard

Jackie and I met the first day of freshman year here at Syracuse University. We instantly connected which was a relief for me since I was nervous I wouldn’t find people like I did back home. However, as the year went on, Jackie and I became more distant. Going out together every week turned into every other month. I didn’t question it, but I should have. One night Jackie asked me to go to a slam poetry event with her. That night, I learned that Jackie had been sexually assaulted.


Sexual assault isn’t properly addressed and taken care of anywhere around the United States. Our society has conditioned us to tuck away the topic of sexual assault, rather than speak about it openly and freely. The hub of the issue with sexual assault is mainly seen on college campuses. Kelly Wallace, a digital correspondent for CNN’s newspaper magazine, states that according to the new survey by the Association of American Universities (AAU), 23% of female college students said “…they experienced some form of unwanted sexual contact — ranging from kissing to touching to rape, carried out by force or threat of force, or while they were incapacitated because of alcohol and drugs”. Statements like these are ever so often released to the public, but nothing seems to change.


Lets take a moment back into time…


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In 1970, college women in England decided to  proudly stand up for sexual assaulted victims, like themselves, and started a worldwide trend of marches that are to this day known as Take Back the Night. It’s a night to raise awareness of sexual assault that begins with people sharing their personal stories of how they were assaulted that then ends with a long walk to stand up for severity of the issue. Now it is 2016, 46 years later, and the issue of sexual assault on college campuses is subsequently more prevalent than ever. According to Jeff Guo, reporter for Washington Post magazine, Penn State University “saw the biggest spike in reports. It had a total of 17 cases in 2007 and 2008, and a total of 80 cases in 2011 and 2012.”


This statistic got me thinking and I explored my own perspective and created an argument of why sexual assault is still a major issue on college campuses. Two main factors that make up my argument for the main causes of sexual assault are universities as a brand name and Greek life.


Universities have been well known institutions around the country to help students learn how to thrive in the real world. For example, Harvard and Stanford University are known to be two of the most prestigious and elite schools in the country. They brand their name well amongst society. However, they take advantage of this.

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Source: http://knowyourix.org/campus-dating-violence/

According to Netflix’s newly released movie, The Hunting Ground, “In 2009-2013 Harvard University had 135 reported sexual assault cases and only 10 were “handled”.” “In 1996-2013, Stanford University had 259 reported sexual assault cases and only one student was expelled.” These elite universities don’t want the media or the public to have any acknowledgement that their campuses have an issue with such a dangerous problem. It degrades the entire purpose of what their university stands for. For centuries, alumni’s have been donating large amounts of money to keep their school in the best shape possible and cases like these would ruin their reputation. Colleges don’t want to own up to the fact that they can’t control such a serious matter, thus they treat the situation like a buzzing fly. It’s constantly buzzing and they can’t swat it because its so minute but they know it will eventually go away. Andrea Pino, a student at University of North Carolina, stated in her interview for the Hunting Ground documentary, “I had nightmares that were so vivid that I would wake up and my neck was bleeding of how much I was scratching off that invisible rapist on my neck again.” Students do not have an active voice in a place that is “home” for them. They can’t speak up because they know the entire representation of the school is much more important than just one single students opinion. Parents pay thousands of dollars each year for their children to attend elite colleges, which entails the best educators and environment in the country, but little do they know that their child also just entered a dangerous hunting ground. Colleges will continue to get away with sexual assault cases it if they aren’t stopped.


Another issue to address is that Greek life is a main instigator for this problem. People mostly think its all men are the predators in this situation and that’s what I thought too. It’s the male image that makes people think that way. They are clearly more aggressive and stronger than women. However, this image is definitely fading. In fact, according to Rape, Abuse, and Incest National Network, “2. 78 million men in the U.S have been victims of sexual assault or rape.” This statistic isn’t close to the effect sexual assault has had on women, but it shows how all men can’t be perpetrated as the predators. This is why I aim the issue at Greek Life. Fraternity brothers live the life style where they feel empowered and entitled in society because they are known as a brother of a fraternity . When they have social events with sororities, their brothers love to instigate other brothers to bring out the worst in them.

“FRATERNITY MEN HAVE A HIGHER RISK FOR COMMITTING SEXUAL ASSAULT.” 

People counterpart this argument by saying, “it’s a few bad apples” however I don’t believe that is the case. Caitlyn Flanagan, a journalist for the Atlantic featured on the Hunting Ground stated, “it is a matter of public record that the second most common type of insurance claim against the fraternity industry is from sexual assault.” On the contrary, it is not all fraternities across the country that are the issue, but a selected few. In the Hunting Ground documentary, it is known at UNC that the fraternity SAE is known as Sexual Assault Expected. This is well known for SAE across the entire south coast. According to Angelica Bonus, a reporter for CNN, “In 2010, SAE fraternity brothers at Yale University chanted on campus, “ no means yes, yes means anal!”” At Wesleyan University, there was a fraternity known as the “Rape Factory” as well. Now, people say that the solution is to ban fraternities across the country. However, fraternities are an American icon across the country and have created larger reputations for themselves other than sexual assault issues. It is also not the fraternity itself, but the selected men within them. This is why I have a different solution.


The solution is executed at Syracuse University.


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Syracuse University students protesting against the closing of the Advocacy Center at Sims Hall in 2014.

Even here at Syracuse University, sexual assault is an issue. According to Syracuse’s local news, WSYR-TV, “In 2012, the latest year statistics are available, the Syracuse University Department of Public Safety received 10 complaints alleging sex offenses. Eight of those were reported to have happened on-campus.” This is very scary being a female college woman myself. Dave Tobin, reporter for The Post-Standard, stated that in 2013, Chancellor Kent Syverud closed the Advocacy Center on Syracuse University campus. Over 70 students protested on Hendricks Chapel and used social media to their advantage. They repeatedly used a Twitter hash tag, #rally4consent, until their voices were heard. They also had 8,000 signatures seeking to reinstate this center. Since then, Syracuse University reopened the Advocacy Center in 2014 and has implemented a great support system to help students who have been sexually assaulted. In every bathroom stall on campus, whether you live in a dorm or go to the library, they explicitly say that students will not be judged or questioned when they report an issue dealing with sexual assault. This is a smart strategy because its located somewhere everyone will definitely see it. It’s not tucked away. They want students to speak up. Take Back The Night is mandatory attendance for every member of a fraternity and sorority every year to raise awareness. BuScreen Shot 2016-04-25 at 3.16.05 AMt people don’t think of it as a drag to attend, it’s more of a want. Students want to unite as a community to help everyone feel safe on campus. This is not the same at other colleges. Syracuse University also takes a pledge for the It’s on US campaign. It’s a different approach for college campuses, like Syracuse University, to have their students view the prevention of sexual assault as a responsibility on campus. It makes students know they are a role model and a leader, not just a student. Joe Biden came to Syracuse University to endorse and speak about this issue through his pledge to stand up against sexual assault. I in fact attended the speech myself and the feelings in the room were so strong. Everyone was speechless.

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New Single by Lady Gaga,  Till it Happens To You. Check out the link above to view  the full  music video and share it on Facebook, Twitter etc.

Like Lady Gaga says in her song to raise awareness for sexual assault, Till It Happens To You, “Cause when you fall you,you gotta get up, you gotta get up and move on.” Syracuse University offers victims of sexual assault to move on in a way that is liberating and satisfying. They are moving in the direction for the solution against sexual assault in a manner that students don’t need to be feeling judged for speaking up. Instead of focusing on the brand of what their university stands for, Syracuse University cares about the student’s individual experiences on campus intensely. Fraternity brothers are well- educated each semester on the issue of sexual assault and this has helped decrease the statistics of sexual assault on campus since 2014. It is imperative that other colleges move in this direction as well. Syracuse knows exactly how to execute a problem when it is presented to the public and without trying to hide it, they solve it.

I want to leave you with an important quote I heard on Youtube from a poetry slam competition, CUPSI 2014: VCU performs “Bois Will Be Boys”, against sexual assault.  “Would you tell her that not all boogeymen live under the bed, some live on top of it.”  People that attend college don’t look back and think about the classes they took or the professors they had, but they remember the endless laughs and precious moments they had with their friends. So lets prevent women, like my friend Jackie, from seeing their  “boogeyman” everyday  for the rest of their lives. Let’s take a stand so college women have more precious moments to hold on to rather than life threatening ones. Be the solution.

Reflection Unit III: 

  1. Answer: The title that I decided would best suit my magazine was The Nightmares of Sexual Assault. It definitely engages the readers into what the magazine is going to talk about. However, I do think I did a better job working on my lede. It’s a line of questions such as,” Was she to blame?”, that would make readers curious about what they are going to read about and why they are being asked. My title is more creative than my lede,but my lede is definitely more thoughtful and clever. It doesn’t lead into the issue, but it definitely is relevant to the topic based on the questions asked. I wish I was more specific with my lede by starting off with a statistic to grasp the more of the readers attention.
  1. Answer: What is very interesting about my introductory section of my magazine article is that it offers a personal story to engage readers into the nightmares of sexual assault, which reflects on the title of the article as well. “Jackie and I met the first day of freshman year here at Syracuse University. We instantly connected which was a relief for me since I was nervous I wouldn’t find people like I did back home. However, as the year went on, Jackie and I became more distant. Going out together every week turned into every other month. I didn’t question it, but I should have. One night Jackie asked me to go to a slam poetry event with her. That night, I learned that Jackie had been sexually assaulted.” It locates a problem by explaining a real life example to readers that they can either reflect on or take in how it is played out in society. By adding a personal touch in the introductory section of an article, it appeals to emotions of readers and grabs their attention.
  1. Answer: I think I did well with offering a strong idea to readers about my topic by adding many statistics about the issue with sexual assault. I started by stating my argument about the issue, which was branding of universities and Greek life, then supporting and analyzing the issue with statistics. For example, “In 2009-2013 Harvard University had 135 reported sexual assault cases and only 10 were “handled” and “In 1996-2013, Stanford University had 259 reported sexual assault cases and only one student was expelled.” These are both statistics that allowed me to evolve into the issue of branding with universities. This was a good example of how I did this throughout my article with other statistics. I did not offer evidence that was obvious to readers; I didn’t even know it until I did some well research myself which I think is very interesting and attention grabbing as well.
  1. Answer: I showed clarity of thought for this article because I stated my argument in the beginning and didn’t deviate from it. I kept on track with my thoughts in a well- organized manner. I also believe that my article is uniquely presented. I added my own pictures that I felt matched best for what I was talking about in the article and I added creative captions as well. For example, for the Lady Gaga picture I captioned it by saying, “New Single by Lady Gaga,  Till it Happens To You. Check out the link above to view  the full  music video and share it on Facebook, Twitter etc.” I thought this gave a personal touch to my article and will draw peoples attention instantly. I also gave a different form of evidence since most of it was offered by a documentary. It took hours for me to go analyze it and find the best statistics to offer in my article. However, I wish I gave more historic information for this article. I touched on it, but I wish I gave more of a timeline feel to include.
  1. Answer: I definitely avoided cliché points by being very blunt and using persuasive information that was suppose to be taken very seriously. However, in my last paragraph, I do see that I got very cheesey at the end. “People that attend college don’t look back and think about the classes they took or the professors they had, but they remember the endless laughs and precious moments…Jackie, from seeing their  “boogeyman” everyday for the rest of their lives….solution.” This paragraph I wish I had made more professional and serious to relate to major issues of sexual assault. I wish I had organized the material a little better, but I strongly developed my article and it has sequence.
  1. Answer: I wish I included more controversy into my article, but a strong one that I included was that not all men should be seen as the predators in society when it comes to sexual assault. I develop a persuasive stance by adding statistics about this issue and how they are affected as well. I wish I used more statistics to create a stronger debate to make an important point about this issue.
  1. Answer: I exceeded the appropriate secondary sources by adding more than 6 and I definitely added more than 1 visual source. I thought it was necessary in order to make my argument strong and to appeal to reader’s eyes more. My primary research is very strong as well since I used the source of the documentary the Hunting Ground to help develop my stance on the issue of sexual assault. This was my strongest area with the article and I take a lot of proud with it.
  1. Answer: I feel like I could have integrated my secondary and primary sources more organized in my article, but they definitely do integrate. They more so support my topic rather than complicate. That was my intentions for this article. I wish I introduced them in a way that could have driven a more deep discussion rather than an informative one.
  1. Answer: The entire purpose of my magazine was to persuade readers that my argument was the main cause of sexual assault. By using personal and strong statistics, I definitely think I appealed to the readers senses by using ethos and pathos. However, I wish I used my logos in my article. The art of persuasion is the best way possible to get readers attentions and I think I executed this very well.
  1. Answer: I started the article with a top header visual of an image of a person stepping off a bed but someone is looking to grab him/her. It is suppose to grab peoples attention to appeal to the title of my article. I then developed by using other visuals such as a crowd of Syracuse to introduce my first paragraph and a description from the It’s on US campaign to give people the opinion of other ways to handle sexual assault. I included commentary by adding captions to all my visuals as well since they are meaningful to the topic. This is why I think I did an appropriate job with my visuals because they are all interesting and extensive. Maybe they are too excessive, but I think it was definitely necessary.
  1. Answer: From all the workshops, such as scrambling our drafts, I improved my final draft drastically. I was confused in the beginning on how to place my primary and secondary sources, but using my peers I was able to have great feedback to make my magazine article the best it could be. The comments from our last project from my teacher also directed me in the right direction of how to approach this assignment and that was very helpful.
  1. Answer:I used hyperlinks to give people the option of whether or not they wanted to get the full information of where I drew my research. I think this was a very effective thing for a writer to do and appropriate as well.
  1. Answer: I think I did well with editing my paper and style. I definitely think I could have better writing skills, but that is what this course has helped me do. My style has grown to be stronger after every assignment we have done since this class, which is very helpful. I draw attention to get credibility for this issue because I have taken a long time to have well researched into this piece.

 

The Heroin Epidemic

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Image from the New York Times

 

Last October, Amy Pelow started a support group in Oswego, New York for the parents and loved ones of heroin addicts. Pelow discovered her 17-year-old son was addicted to heroin when she received a phone call informing her that he had overdosed and was currently being hospitalized. She rushed to the Oswego Hospital to find his lanky, teenage body hooked up to machines and injected with various tubes. Since then, he has overdosed 8 times and rotated in and out of rehabs and jail multiple times.

Pelow calls herself a reformed ambulance chaser.

When she used to hear ambulances howling across the small-city sprawl of Oswego, she would instantaneously text and call her son. If he did not respond immediately, she would hop into her car and track the sound of the mechanical wailing. The whole time she would image her son’s unconscious body waiting at the end of her chase. But after six years, she has retired from this hunt.

The prevalence of heroin throughout this country is an epidemic that has claimed headlines and lives with increased frequency in the past decade. Heroin-related deaths across the country jumped 39 percent from 2012-2013 and the rate of heroin-related overdose deaths nearly quadrupled from 2002 to 2013, according to the CDC.

In New York State alone, the number of deaths attributed to overdoses of opioids – which does include both heroin and prescription painkillers such as Oxycontin – rose from 940 in 2004 to 2,044 in 2012 – 117 percent jump, according to the state Health Department.

In downtown Syracuse, there is a needle exchange program called ACR Health. In 2011, they had just 16 people picking up clean needles. This year, they are already at 753.

Although the statistical and anecdotal evidence revealing the extent of the heroin epidemic is clear and straightforward, the factors that created and sustain this situation are more complex. The most widely accepted theory behind the heroin epidemic is one revolving around regulation oversight and greedy pharmaceutical companies, according to a commentary recently published in the New England Journal of Medicine.

About twenty-five years ago, pharmaceutical companies started pushing the over prescription of opiate pain killers, such as OxyContin and Vicodin, in order to increase their revenues. The intensity of these drugs and the generosity with which they were prescribed led to high rates of addiction over time. Grandmas and teens, the rich and the poor started getting hooked on these serious pain killers.

Eventually, physicians and authorities realized this incredible rate of addiction and the government subsequently started cracking down on this excess of opiate prescription. Means were implemented to limit and monitor the amount of opiates a doctor could prescribe per a patient and data bases were established that tallied the amount of opiates patients received from different doctors. Measures such as these successfully decreased the availability of and access to this very addictive drug.

But then, tens of thousands of people were suddenly looking for a similar high that would blunt their withdrawal symptoms that felt like hell. It was at this time that ingenious Mexican drug cartels took this opportunity to flood the market with heroin, another type of opiate. And there was quite a substantial consumer base waiting to be exploited.

Laura Samson’s* brother started with pills and now he battles a sometimes 100-dollar-a-day heroin addiction. “I remember the day I found out he was a heroin addict, “Laura wrote in a blog post, “My body shook, I grew nauseous, and for the first time in my entire life, my heart hurt. His life would now be a constant battle between happiness, addiction, and the law.”

Laura’s story captures the heartache that more and more families and loved ones across that nation are experiencing as the number of heroin users creeps upwards. Their reality is a tortuous oscillation between insatiable fear for the life of the user and anger at the user for how they have reduced themselves and dragged all who love them into a terrify cycle of anxiety and hopelessness.

 

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In addition to the mental, emotional and physical turmoil that people addicted to heroin and their loved ones experience, another massive obstacle is defiantly placed between them and recovery: The overwhelming lack of resources.

Even if addicts want to quit, there is simply not enough room in rehabilitation centers nor enough effective rehabilitation practices and facilities. Some specialists in places like Central and Upstate New York offer intense, one-month rehabs. This way they are able to crank people in and out as there are so many addicts looking for help and not enough available services. But the relapse rates are incredibly high.

Laura’s brother went to a one-month rehab, which cost her family twenty-one thousand dollars. They had some insurance, but still went about ten thousand dollars into debt attempting to ensure her brother’s recovery. Even though they were willing to pay for a more expensive rehab, they had to call several different facilities several times a day to secure him a spot in one. After he was finally admitted, paid the hefty fee and completed the program, he relapsed about three weeks out and is currently back to using regularly.

Syracuse addiction specialist, Dr. Laura Martin, said the methadone clinic in Syracuse has five hundred spots for treatment and a standard year-long waiting list. She has a loose-leaf notebook in her office with several pages filled with the names of opiate and heroin addicts who have come to her office looking for treatment and who she just doesn’t have room for. Pelow’s son has been on a waiting list for treatment since this past July.

In response to this national epidemic, many cities across the US are starting to implement social and community based responses to the rampant use of heroin, as traditional approaches continue to fail.

In Santa Fe, New Mexico, Emily Kaltenbach, the state director for the Drug Policy Alliance of New Mexico says she is tired of seeing the same nonviolent drug offenders filling the court’s dockets and burdening taxpayers with expensive jail stays. She is trying to implement a community-based social program to divert people away from jail before they are fingerprinted, booked and charged.

In Ithaca, New York, the mayor is proposing a safe place for addicts to get high but under the surveillance of health specialists. This would also be a step toward addicts getting serious help.

Ithaca and Santa Fe are just a couple examples of the alternative measures being taking by city and state government to compensate for the futility of federal policies.

However, there is an opinion increasing in popularity that even the Obama administration is tentatively on board with. This is the idea that heroin use should not be treated as a crime and addicts should not be framed as criminals, but heroin addiction it should be seen as a disease. Secretary of State John Kerry said in a statement recently, “We are seeing tremendous advances in our understanding of drug dependency and our ability to address substance use disorders as a public health — rather than a strictly criminal justice — challenge.”

The primary approach of prohibition and criminalization has merely fed the cycle of addiction over the years. When Pelow’s son went to jail, she said he gained access to more networks to feed his addiction. A criminal record also compounds feelings of hopelessness, as now beating addiction and starting life again becomes that much more difficult.

The criminalization of heroin use and the punishment associated with this disease also feeds into the shame and stigma around it. Pelow said for years she would hid the fact that her son was a heroin addict because she was embarrassed and afraid of being judged.

Historically speaking, heroin has always been a drug with the notorious reputation of being one of the most intense, expensive drugs for the long-term, hardcore drug addicts passed out in a back ally.

But this stigma is no longer relevant, according to data such as the 2001-2002 National Institute on Alcohol Abuse and Alcoholism survey, which shows that lifetime opiate users (including heroin) fall across a gamete of educational, age, and financial lines. Fifty-seven percent have attended college. Thirty-five percent make less than $35,000 in their annual salary. Thirty-nine percent are female, which stands out as unusual since studies show that many forms of addiction tend to disproportionally target men. But with opiate addiction, it is men and women, high school drop outs and college graduates, people driving Hondas and people with Ferraris. Today, opiate and heroin addiction does not discriminate.

But experts, such as Dr. Martin, say this image still connected with heroin is a force that inhibits users from seeking help and doctors from extending it.

“Most doctors don’t want to have a whole bunch of addicts sitting in their waiting room because they picture an addict as coming off the streets with a blanket around them and sleeping on their floor and that kind of thing. But really they come in suits and ties and from their college campuses,” Dr. Martin said.

And people that work with heroin addiction, like employees at ACR Health in Syracuse, say that this archaic stigma prevents addicts from reaching out and trying to get help.

Decriminalizing heroin would help in combating the stigma around heroin use and perhaps encourage more addicts to pursue recovery. This decriminalization would also mean families would not have to also contend with the myriad of legalities around arrests and criminal offenses and it could make a terrible situation incrementally more bearable.

 

*Laura Samson is a pseudonym. She was comfortable sharing her story, but not here real identity.

 

 

 

[1] The title to my article is straightforward and direct, but it communicates the seriousness of this issue and article. Since heroin use and the tragedies surrounding it are so dire and bleak, I did not want to be creatively or playful with the title. I wanted to retain a serious and level tone, which reflects the tone throughout the piece.

[2] I started the piece with an anecdote, which I heard first hand in my hometown of Oswego. It is a jarring and sad story that I thought would not only pull readers in (or ‘hook’ them), but also personalize a story that is a lot of big and scary numbers. The story of Amy Pelow and her son does not really provide initial background or rationale, but it is supposed to immediately make people feel and care. It does provide exigency, as the heroin epidemic is a timely and relevant issue and the fact the Pelow’s son is hospitalized in the beginning shows even more the urgency of this issue.

[3] I think I provide multiple ‘ideas’ in this article, each with analysis and supporting evidence. First, I discuss the extent of the epidemic and the factors that have created that situation. I use a variety of statistics and sources when constructing this section. Then I discuss the complexity of the stigma and resources and community-based responses and the need to decriminalize heroin. I struggled with flow and fluidly in this piece, but I thought I manage ‘ideas’ and their analysis well.

[4] As mentioned before, clarity and fluidity were issues I had in this piece because I had so much information I wanted to include to show the melee that is the heroin epidemic and how it impacts people and how the country is trying to respond. I thought my presentation and especially my anecdotes made my take of this issue unique, in addition to my final argument to decriminalize heroin use and why that is important.

[5] I think most of the arguments and information I provided was backed up and flushed out and not vague or cliché. When I stated something, I provided examples or quotes or data to prove it. For example, I discussed the impact of heroin addiction on family and loved ones and I used Laura as an example of that.

[6] I think I deeply researched this issue, but I do think my final argument of decriminalization could have been even stronger but I was not quite sure how to do that. But I covered many aspects of this issue, building a comprehensive stance and argument. I provide an overview of the epidemic and break down some of the complexities within this reality, like lack of resources or impact on family.

[7] I used a lot of sources and a diverse set of them from news articles to scholarly journals to academic essays to multiple primary sources.

[8] I think I meshed my sources into the article fairly well, but maybe I could have included them even more of them. I think I might have done the opposite of drop quoting. I researched this issue so much that I was confident to just write about it and probably could have referenced sources more.

[9] I think I could definitely persuade my audience that heroin use should be decriminalized. I tried to do this mostly through evoking emotion. I wanted to show readers how terrible this situation was for addicts and their families and how really it is not completely their faults for being there and grace and sympathy should be extended to them as opposed to judgement.

[10] I thought the first visual I used provided context for the increasing prevalence of heroin use in the US. I placed it is the beginning because it is one of the first aspects of this issue I address. I included the texts because I thought they might further evoke emotion from readers.

[11] My development was incremental. I started with too much information trying to include every aspect of this issue and slow edited some of that content out of the article.

[12] Yes, effective. But upon reflection, I think I probably could have included even more.

[13] I tried to use very powerful language and proofread several times so I think I used language effectively overall and presented myself as credible.

UNIT 3 ARTICLE Race and Sports: Can Superman be Black?

Will Bradley-Villarini

Professor Barone-Phillips

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4/24/16

                                                                

                                         Race and Sports: Can Superman be Black?

Disclaimer for understanding: Cam Newton’s nickname is Superman based on a touchdown celebration that he performs where he pretends to rip open his jersey like superman does when he reveals his identity to go fight crime.

To many whites, men of my vintage, men I knew, there was a sense that their game was being stolen. It was a very visceral racism.”- Frank Deford, NPR

Sports have been around for thousands of years in human culture. They date as far back as the early hundreds, or as long as military training has existed. Sport(s) is defined by dictionary.com as : “an athletic activity requiring skill or physical prowess and often of a competitive nature”. Many white athletes feel as if there are spots are being taken by African-American players or players of different races (the quote above from Frank Deford). It’s quite ridiculous to think that because the definition of Sport says that it “requires skill”, therefore, no matter what skin color you are, if you’re skilled then you should be playing. In the modern 21st century, the argument of race in sports is still very present and it has a history, especially in the last 100 years or so with events such as the Civil Rights movement. Football is a great example of the ever-burning flame of racism that still exists in sports for a few reasons.nfl_i_newtonc_576

Historically, the franchise players or “star players” on the football teams have been the quarterbacks. At the beginning of the 2015-16 NFL season, only 6 starting quarterbacks out of the total 32 were of color (19.2%). Cam Newton, the MVP quarterback that led the Carolina Panthers to an 18-1 record and a Super Bowl is the spotlight of this article due to the attention he brought to the issue of racism in football. His unique set of skills, arrogance, and impressive dancing extracted a lot of hatred from white America. The issue of racism in sports is very present to this day, I’m going to cover the history of racism in sports and compare it to Mr. Newton and his story in the current time of 2016.

I personally believe that racism is currently alive and well in sports, especially in football. It’s not good for American culture along with sports and the industry as a whole. The sports industry in the United States makes $495 billion yearly, making it one of the biggest contributors to the U.S economy. If racism keeps causing debates in the sports world then it will continue to move backwards.

When looking into the history of race and sports it is crucial to look at the statistics of when players of color graced the field for the first time in each major sport. The NFL’s first black player was Marion Motley back in 1946. The MLB’s first was Jackie Robinson in 1947. And finally, the NBA’s first player of color was Chuck Cooper in 1950. Based on those statistics, there were exactly 0 players of color in America’s most popular sports before 1946. That statistic is baffling without a doubt and it’s concerning as well. Scientists from Smith College believe that this absence was due to a couple of factors. The reasons surround the idea that minorities are different from whites and that they are “inferior”. The first reason that Smith College gave was in regards to physical prowess. The belief that African-Americans have a physical superiority (running faster, jumping higher, increased reflexes) is “closely yoked to an anti-intellectualism that permeates black male culture” (Smith College, Page 2). This ideology of physical inequality leads to the caucasian player creating more inequality because of their resentment toward their own personal abilities. That comparison correlates with another discriminatory categorization of African-Americans by saying that they’re also not as “intellectual” as the white players. These ideologies are poisonous and they are still prevalent today.

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Cameron Jerrell Newton is a 26 year-old black male who is going into his 6th season as the starting quarterback for the Carolina Panthers. In the 2015-16 NFL season, Newton led the Panthers to an 18-1 record, even adding a Super Bowl appearance. The Panthers were the favorites to win after a dominating season, however, the Denver Broncos’ unbreakable defense ruined what could have been a legendary season for Newton and the Panthers franchise. Newton received flack as the season progressed for a handful of reasons and he took it as an issue of racism. Newton came out in an USA Today article to say “I’m an African-American quarterback that may scare a lot of people because they haven’t seen nothing they can compare me to”(USA Today, Gluck). What makes Newton so “incomparable” is his ability to be dangerous both in the air and on the ground. Standing at 6’5” and 245 lbs., Newton was able to rush for 636 yards and 10 touchdowns, an incredible statistic for a QB, as well as throw for 3,837 yards and 35 touchdowns. Newton ended the season with a QBR of 99.4, a number viewed as off the charts, and earned the title of MVP. Cam saw the issue as White America being threatened by him because he was putting up Tom Brady-like numbers. However, the problem here is that Tom Brady is white and Cam Newton is black. In Cam’s eyes, that means that people are resorting to stereotypes and discrimination because a black man is putting up amazing statistics in a predominantly white position. Throughout history, the franchise player of NFL teams have been the quarterbacks. Charles K Ross, a professor and author on black culture’s input on this topic was stated as : “Who was going to be the face of your franchise and your product? A white man” (New York Times, Powell).

Some of the other aspects that make Newton a “threat” refer with how he behaves on the field. If you are familiar with Newton’s story, or if you have ever watched him play then you would know that the quarterback loves to dance, and perhaps too much. After every first down, every touchdown, and pretty much after any successful play, one can find Newton “hitting the dab”. The dab is a dance move where the person bends their head into the bend of their elbow in a swift motion. This dance was introduced to the public thanks to the Atlanta based rap group “Migos”. During a game against the Tennessee Titans, Newton rushed for a touchdown and proceeded to celebrate for around 15 seconds. His dancing was so extra that a defensive lineman by the name of Wesley Woodyard ran up to him in anger, followed by the referee running over to break the altercation up, however,  Newton kept going even as the ref yelled and pushed him away. In the post game conference Newton addressed the altercation. He explained how someone told him that they weren’t going to let him “hit the dab” anymore and he swiftly followed up by saying: “If you don’t like it, then don’t let me in (the end zone)”(Cam Newton, ESPN).  That statement comes across as pretty arrogant and it is understandable why that would enrage someone who is quick to rush to stereotypes, but Newton isn’t incorrect. Newton’s celebrations got Seattle Seahawks fans so mad that they started a petition to ban Newton from their stadium. Another on-field activity that Newton likes to partake in is the distribution of footballs to young fans after he scores a touchdown. Many spectators see Newton’s actions as distracting and time wasting. The fact that giving a ball to a kid that can’t be older than 10 years old can make somebody mad  shows how easy people rush to barrage Newton and his image.

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Warren Moon, a legendary black quarterback went through a lot of the same hardships as Cam Newton, leading him to mentor the young QB in his time of need. Moon started in the NFL in 1984 as one of the first black starting quarterbacks in the history of the game. Moon broke plenty of boundaries, however, he was very talented and deserved to play. He received a lot of hateful  comments and death threats which makes one wonder how bad it must have been back in the 80’s compared to 2016. It made complete sense for Moon to mentor Newton and he had a lot of choice words about the NFL and racism along with advice for young Newton. In a recent article for the New York Times, Warren referred to the black players roles in the NFL by saying : “We were good for the athletic, reaction positions: run, jump, block” and followed up by saying : “ I felt like I was going out there half the time representing my race as opposed to representing my team and teammates”.(New York Times, Powell) These words by the legendary player proved very powerful. The difficulty of having to focus on representing your race in a sport instead of your team really exemplifies the importance of racial difference in sports at that time. Moon went on to explain that if he hadn’t been focusing on representing his race the whole time then he would have had an even better career.

     

Charles K. Ross, a history professor at the University of Mississippi and the author of “Outside the Lines: African-Americans and the Integration of the National Football League “ had some thoughts on the NFL from what he had learned throughout his career as a researcher of black culture. Ross analyzed that the franchise players have historically been the quarterbacks, and white ones at that. Therefore the business of the NFL and their teams’ money makers have historically been a white man in the pocket with the ball, with no room for a black man to take the helm. That reason led Ross to say : “Football was not ready to move into the 21st century”. (New York Times, Powell) The reason for saying that is because there were so many great talents of color that were ready to come into the NFL but the business model of the NFL as a corporation would get in the way of that.

Brandon Marshall, a wide receiver for the New York Jets holds a different position on the Cam Newton debate. Marshall stated : “I don’t think it’s racial. I just think that there’s a box that we put our quarterbacks in and we say, ‘This is how you’re supposed to be” .(New York Daily News, Walder)  Cam Newton is definitely a unique character. He’s loud, wears crazy outfit, and loves “dabbin” all over the place so it makes that he doesn’t fit the description. However, he then continued to say: “This is how Peyton Manning did it, this is how Joe Montana did it, Tom Brady, so you do it the same way”.(New York Daily News, Walder) Marshall coincidentally compared Cam to three of the most famous white quarterbacks in the NFL who are cardboard cutouts, in a sense that they all act in the same quiet and “professional” way.

I do not see why dancing and crazy outfits would make people so mad if it weren’t a race thing. If Tom Brady did the same things would everyone really be mad? I don’t think so, I think that the white fans would eat it up and that the African-American community would be the ones taking offense to it, once again making it a race issue. No matter what direction it travels, this seems to be a race thing.

Racism in U.S sports needs to be addressed publicly. There needs to be a campaign to end the problem, because it’s taking away from the entertainment of the sports and the consumers who keep the industry alive. A great example of a campaign to end racism is in Fútbol, better known as soccer in the United States. As some might know, soccer is the most popular sport in the world. There are an estimated 2.2 billion fans in the soccer world. There have been campaigns worldwide and even in the MLS (Major League Soccer, the American soccer league) to try and combat racism in the “beautiful game”. These campaigns go by the names of “No to Racism” and “Fútbol for Hope”. They have millions of supporters and are successfully moving to eliminate racism by increasing public awareness of intolerance and discrimination in fútbol, as well as developing ideas and strategies on how to fight them. 

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This movement is fantastic for the fight against racism, but why aren’t America’s most popular sports taking actions like these to combat racism? This issue is huge and it is changing the game. These actions are surely being taken in some form by the NFL, however, if a corporation as powerful and wealthy as the NFL hasn’t even attempted to create a campaign as dynamic as European Fútbol has, then some questions could be reasonably asked. Maybe it’s because the other big corporations linked with the NFL are against it, or maybe it goes against their business ideas. Nobody really knows, but something needs to happen because we can’t keep living like the world was 100 years ago, as well as ignoring the issue as a whole.

Cam Newton is a great delegate for this everlasting issue because his story is relevant and shows the true colors of some people in American sports today who still see pigmentation as a dividing factor. Everyone is subject to their own opinions, however, I see this as a real matter of discrimination by White America who feel like all of the white players are being kicked out of sports. I can see why that would enrage some but lets go back to the definition of sport. It clearly states : “ an activity requiring skill or physical prowess”. If you are more skilled, black or white, then you deserve to be playing. The better you are, the more interesting the sports will become. People need to stop caring about the skin color who is taking who’s spot and start realizing that the better players are the ones making the sports that they love so dearly more amazing.

If you’re from Philadelphia and you’re an Eagles fan, whose team happens to be entirely filled with black players (or white, or mixed) and you win the Super Bowl, then there should be no problem at all. Your team was the best, that is all. Other teams, and their supporters shouldn’t decide it’s because their kicker is white or “It’s because their defense is full of big black guys”, they should applaud them because they were the best. Hate them for being good, be jealous, just don’t make race the issue to throw your stereotypes at.

The sports world is filled with stereotypes, jealously, hatred, and idiocy. We need to come together as a country to enjoy the sports that we love and not argue over other pointless issues that really don’t have anything to do with sports. People are getting mad because they feel insecure or because they need someone to blame, so why not go with the classic “blame the black guy” approach from 200 years ago? The sports industry is important to the economy and to the enjoyment of the hundreds of millions of viewers that keep the industry alive. Stop worrying about whose playing in the games and start worrying about whether your team will have a good season or not.

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The Panama Papers Have Shown Us that Nobody Can Be Trusted

The Panama Papers Have Shown Us that Nobody Can Be Trusted

By Evan Becker

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Lionel Messi, arguably the best soccer player, and a person who made roughly $731,579 dollars per game for his club team in Barcelona is not a man who needs more money. Honestly, if you were to ask most people, they would be content if they made that much money in a year and considering that the median household income for an American family is $81,000 dollars per year, Lionel Messi is not short on cash compared to the rest of the world. The fact that Lionel Messi is that rich shouldn’t be surprising, he is the best player on the best team for the most popular sport in the World. For the entertainment that he brings to fans, I would say that he is adequately paid. But, On April 3rd, 2016, Lionel Messi was named as a conspirator in the Panama Papers, indicting him on hiding his money in an offshore account in an attempt to avoid paying his taxes for what he has earned.                                                                                                             The Panama Papers is a huge collection of documents and other information being investigated by the ICIJ, an international team of journalist’s intent on showing the world the truth about all of these elected officials and other incredibly rich people who need to avoid paying taxes. This accusation is damning because not only does it show the amount of greed that Lionel Messi, it shows that he went through the time and the work, away from the game, to shield his money in an offshore company. Is Lionel Messi an evil person for what he has done? Probably not. But, being named in the Panama is not a good sign for him since now his name is connected to Vladimir Putin, Mauricio Macri and the now resigned, Prime minister of Iceland among many other corrupt government officials. Each of these people had their own reasons for setting up an offshore account, but all of these officials need to be held accountable for what they have done. The Panama Papers have given us concrete proof for the first time that worldwide leaders and businessmen are stockpiling wealth while avoiding paying their taxes. These leaders need to be punished correctly for their actions.

According to the Panama Papers, creating one of these off-shore shell companies is in fact very easy. All these people would have to do, is to visit the local office of a “little-known but powerful law firm based in Panama, Mossack Fonsenco.” At there local office, you can create your own company, must likely under the name of a family member, and instead of using that company to do things, you just deposit your wealth into it, and avoid paying your taxes. To go along with not paying taxes, nobody will even know that this company exists, so all money deposited there has no background or trace, meaning it can come from anywhere. It is for that reason that the Panama Papers is so damning because not only are these officials not paying their taxes, but we also have no idea where they got their money from. An ancient Chinese proverb says “If you want no one to know, don’t do it” which in the context of the Panama Papers means that since they didn’t want anyone to know where they got their money from, it most likely comes from somewhere bad.

The number of world leaders named in the Panama Papers is actually shocking, but it is only one piece of the pie. According to the ICIJ, Mossack Fansenco has set up over “214,488 offshore entities connected to people in more than 200 countries and territories.” This number is astronomical, since it is not cheap to set up these companies, so the fact that over 200,000 people thought it would be necessary to set up an illegal off-shore company to hide the evidence of their wealth is abhorrent. By having over 200,000 people on their roster for people who have created these companies, it is evident that this type of activity is extremely commonplace for business men and other rich people around the world.

With over 200,000 clients, that means there are over 200,000 people or companies that needed to hide the evidence of their wealth. The firm has helped everything from “Africa’s diamond trade, the international art market and other businesses that thrive on secrecy.” to “The firm has serviced enough Middle East royalty to fill a palace. It’s helped two kings, Mohammed VI of Morocco and King Salman of Saudi Arabia, take to the sea on luxury yachts.” All of these organizations are shrouded in secrecy, so it would make sense for each of these industries to be involved with these offshore companies. But, having kings and princes involved in this scam indicates that people do use these companies to hide their wealth.

 

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The reaction to the release of the Panama Papers has been extremely varied from country to country. The most encouraging country to take action has been Iceland. In 2013, future Prime Minister Sigmundur David Gunnlaugsson ran for Prime Minister on the platform of not being corrupt. But when he was named as an owner of an offshore company in the Panama Papers, Iceland’s citizens were less than pleased and the very next day, an estimated 10,000 citizens of Iceland rallied in Reykjavik, Iceland. The photo above shows the central downtown of Reykjavik. Edward Snowden said on Twitter that “The population of Iceland is only 330,000. Largest protest by percentage of population in history?” Following this protest, Gunnlaugsson initially denied any and all allegations against him, by saying ““I have not considered quitting because of this matter nor am I going to quit because of this matter.” But after 3 straight days of complete protest, The Prime Minister resigned in disgrace, and democracy had worked again. Clearly Iceland had a very strong and coordinated response to the allegations against its leaders, but unfortunately not every country has the kind of free flowing information that Icelandic citizens.

In China, “Family members of at least eight current or former members of China’s Politburo Standing Committee, the country’s main ruling body, have offshore companies arranged though Mossack Fonseca. They include President Xi’s brother-in-law, who set up two British Virgin Islands companies in 2009.” But, the difference between China and Iceland, is that China is not a true democracy, and in response to the corruption allegations against the leaders of China decided to censor the online discussion of the Panama Papers and “Checks by the BBC found that by the end of the day many of those posts had disappeared, with at least 481 discussions deleted from the hashtag’s Weibo topic page, and other posts shared on Wechat also deleted.” By not allowing free discussion of their people to discuss this critical issue, not only are the leaders of China insinuating their guilt, again if they had done nothing wrong, then there would be nothing to censor. So in an attempt to quell the masses, they have resorted to censoring logical discussion and not allowing the tales of their corruption to reach the ears of their own citizens.

The leaders of Russia have resorted to questioning the reporters’ credibility and the truth behind some of their actions in addition to shamelessly censoring all conversation. During a radio broadcast where Putin was questioned about the Panama Papers, he said that “They are just trying to cause confusion” By questioning the intentions of the journalists, he himself is trying to cause confusion on what to believe. Clearly, the State run news outlets of Russia are not going to question whether Putin is fit to run his country if he is connected to an offshore company. Instead, they will attack the credibility of the journalists who uncovered these documents and in doing so, they will persuade the public masses to just let this type of scandal go unaccounted for. Putin knows exactly what he is doing when he says these types of comments, and it is purely a smear attempt to distill public out cry so he can continue to stay in power.

The Panama Papers though, have yet to name any Americans, which is a large reason that they have not garnered the type of reaction and outcry that has been seen throughout the rest of the world. By not naming any prominent Americans, the ICIJ must not have uncovered their names yet, or they are withholding the information to release it at a later time where the news would have a greater impact. If the ICIJ has not released any American names by election day in November, then there must not be any names on the list worthy of note.

The Panama Papers have opened the window for the people of the world to see exactly how the wealthy retain their wealth without giving it back to the people. The 1% have stolen, racked up assets, and then hid them all in off-shore companies to avoid any government knowledge of what they have done and it is thus imperative for the people of the world to stand up to this type of corruption. It really feels like the Panama Papers have changed how everyday people view the world. This controversy is more complicated than it would appear because we don’t know where they get their money from, they could even be using their stockpiled wealth to do great things around the world. But, if you are a leader of a major country in this world, you can not afford to be corrupt because of businesses are corrupt and the government is corrupt, who do the people have to look to in times of distress? The answer is in the end it must come from the people to insist that there is a worldwide institutional change. More countries need to take the actions of Iceland and peacefully protest against their leaders so that the world can become a fairer place. The Panama Papers will end up being either the most effective avenue for change in world history, or the most depressing if nothing comes of it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Pay for Play, a Need for NCAA Action

The average salary of a Division I men’s football coach is $1.64 million, and $1.5 million for their counterpart, men’s basketball coaches whose team makes it to the NCAA tournament. Yet, the NCAA a “non-profit” organization had an annual revenue just shy of $1 billion in 2014 according to USA today, with 90 percent coming from March madness alone. With major college sports generating this type revenue year-in and year-out it’s difficult to grasp where all of this money is truly going, and why hasn’t it been returned to the stars of the show, the athletes. A majority of people may be unaware of the reality of this grueling business and its corruption. Throughout this piece I would like to bring forth the issues behind the scenes and discuss the potential, but controversial, topic of paying college athletes. Although division I college athletes are legally amateurs by the NCAA rules, they are acting as full-time employees to the university and generating millions in revenue of which they are not seeing a penny of. In the big picture, scholarships are not adequate compensation for the revenue being produced, and therefor college athletes should receive stipends beyond their scholarships.

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With an annual revenue of $912.3 million in 2015, the NCAA is considered a 501(c) (3) organization. Meaning that they are tax exempt under the IRS, and are pooled among other organizations such as Red Cross and the Salvation Army. But, in economic terms, the NCAA would qualify as a monopsony. This means that they are one buyer within a market of unlimited sellers, and in this case the sellers being the athletes selling themselves to colleges and receiving zero for their labor. The organization has made it clear that they will not condone the paying of college athletes that they consider to be “amateurs.” The term amateurism is expressed on NCAA.org and described as being the “bedrock principle of college athletics,” and “being crucial to preserving an academic environment in which acquiring a quality education is the first priority.”

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In 2012 the NCAA signed a 14-year agreement with CBS and Turner Broadcasting System for the rights to March Madness worth $10.8 million. In 2016 this contract was extended to 2032 in another $8.8 million deal. $1.5 million is the cost for a 30-second advertisement spot during the tournament. (Read more about revenue breakdown)

 

The underlying statement being made here is that these are “student-athletes,” with an emphasis on the student. However, graduation rates may tell a different story. There are two measures to ensure that an athletes earn a degree. First the U.S. Department of Education’s Federal Graduation Rate, and second the NCAA’s Graduation Success Rate. According to the NCAA, 100 percent of the members of the Duke men’s basketball team who entered as freshman in 2007 graduated. But, the federal measurement, which takes into account the percentage of full-time college student-athletes who enter as freshmen and finish with a specific degree within six years, calculated that only 67 percent of male players during that time period actually graduated. There is a large discrepancy among these numbers that may be due to the NCAA failing to take into account the “one-and-done” players, career ending injuries, or even drop outs. As long as these players were in good academic standings before their departures, they are also added to the positive graduation rates.

Where is all the money going?

               Coach Krzyzewski, head coach of the Duke men’s basketball made a whopping $7,233,967 last year, along with another $5,400,000 made by John Calipari, Kentucky men’s basketball coach. Clemson University have written plans to build a $55 million complex solely for men’s football that includes sand volleyball courts, laser tag, movie theatre, barber shop and other amenities. Combined 48 of the schools from the wealthiest conferences spent $772 million on all athletic facilities. But, according to CBS News, only 3 percent of men’s basketball programs turned a profit last year. This may be due in part to cost pressure from the top schools to pay the coaches extremely high wages. Also, a report released by Delta Cost Project found that Division I universities on average spend about three to six time as much per athlete than they do on academics per student. Reminder, the NCAA’s main opposition to paying athletes is that they are “students first.” It’s hard to believe that these college athletes aren’t considered full-time employees that putting in over 40 hours of work just related to their sport each are students-first. After practice, film reviews, and scheduled lifting the players can finally get to their schoolwork. Such high demands of being an athlete have recently been linked to pooling athletes’ into general majors together. Evidence shows that the majority of college athletes have chosen a major in general studies. This due to a lack of ability to maintain the balance between their sport demands and school, or even because the coach told them to in order ensure eligibility. What does this say about the universities and the employees (coaches) who are supposed to be looking out for the best interests of the student-athletes? This situation has been corrupted and solely geared towards maintaining eligibility for top players in order to win games, rather than planning and pursuing a career for the future. The matter of fact is that college athletes being exploited for their work, or in this case their athletic performance while continuously turning nearly $1 billion into a yearly loss by wastefully spending money on extreme facilities that are exclusively geared towards athletic benefits and not academics. The NCAA and institutions pride themselves on the notion of having the best interest of the student-athletes in mind, but I’m not so sure this is the reality.

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Not only is the money being generated by college sports an at-large issue, but the cost of being a full-time student-athlete on a full scholarship is often misleading. People often assume that there is a surplus of full-scholarships, or that scholarships are more than enough to “hand out.” However, the average amount of money awarded to division I athletes was $13,821 for men and $14,660 for women. Also just about 3 percent of all high school athletes will receive a complete full ride to play in college. There are also strict rules that have been put in place by the NCAA that establishes how many scholarships each team at a university can receive. Only six sports, commonly referred to as “head-count” sports, which include football, men’s and women’s basketball, women’s gymnastics, volleyball and tennis, have enough full-scholarships to cover the team in its entirety. On the other hand the rest of the collegiate sports teams are limited by the NCAA as to how many full rides that they receive.

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This is the breakdown of full-scholarships per team allotted to the non-head count sports by the NCAA

Yet, this organization has an annual profit of about $145 million and is only returning about $12.3 in expenses for scholarships to the universities. This could be the biggest discrepancy for the NCAA and one of the main reasons that player’s unions and other people are demanding reform. In the 2011-2012 fiscal year, a study was conducted by Ithaca College researchers that reported the average expenses that a college athlete was required to pay beyond their scholarships was about $4,000. “Free rides” fail to cover the cost of living for a typical college student, but these athletes are still students before anything. Cell phone bills, gas money, groceries and rent for housing off campus are just a few of the additional expenses that a college student may see. These expenses may be taken care of if the players were able to have a part-time job, but once again the NCAA bans in-season work. Often it can even be difficult for athletes to find the time or money to get in three meals a day with their schedules. Recently University of Connecticut basketball start Shabazz Napier spoke out about this issue and stated, “there are hungry nights that I go to bed starving.” (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fFdRk2DYolM)

Opportunity for Reform

The NCAA has a significant issue that must be attended to within the near future. With the multimillion dollar enterprise claiming itself as a non-profit organization through the IRS, it has come to a point of college athletic exploitation. The organization continues to fight off any efforts to find more money to pay student-athletes directly through stipends, but also wishes to leave the gap between their profits and the limited number of scholarships allotted to the non-head count sports. Also, they are holding onto their belief that these athletes remain students-first, when there is an abundance of evidence that points directly to men’s basketball and football simply being farm systems for the professionals to pick from. It seems that there needs to be a re-evaluation as to how much money is being spent on facilities and coaching, and more time spent of finding ways to bring the money back directly to the athletes themselves. After all, these college athletes are indeed the money-makers.

References

Deford, Frank. “Deford: Paying College Athletes Would Level The Playing Field.” NPR. NPR, 2 Apr. 2014. Web. 5 Apr. 2016. <http://www.npr.org/2014/04/02/297898279/deford-paying-college-athletes-would-level-the-playing-field>.

“NCAA.org – The Official Site of the NCAA.” NCAA.org – The Official Site of the NCAA. NCAA, n.d. Web. 20 Apr. 2016. <https://www.ncaa.org/>.

Nocera, Joe. “Let’s Start Paying College Athletes.” The New York Times. The New York Times, 31 Dec. 2011. Web. 21 Apr. 2016. <http://www.nytimes.com/2012/01/01/magazine/lets-start-paying-college-athletes.html>.

Sanderson, Allen R. and John J. Siegfried. 2015. “The Case for Paying College Athletes.” Journal of Economic Perspectives, 29(1):115-38.

Strachan, Maxwell. “NCAA Schools Can Absolutely Afford To Pay College Athletes, Economists Say.” The Huffington Post. TheHuffingtonPost.com, 27 Mar. 2015. Web. 12 Apr. 2016. <http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2015/03/27/ncaa-pay-student-athletes_n_6940836.html>.
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Planned Parenthood and the importance of government funding for women’s health

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With the presidential race in full swing, a controversial topic that has been on the horizon for years back is Planned Parenthood and the argument of the government funding this organization. Now most of the republican party is against Planned Parenthood, whether it’s because they don’t want to support an organization that provides abortion because of their faith or morals, or just don’t find it important enough to spend money on. Texas was the first state to defund Planned Parenthood but not soon after, Alabama, Arkansas, Kansas, Louisiana, and North Carolina followed behind as well as Utah, Wisconsin and Ohio.

Texas Senator and presidental candidate, Ted Cruz at a "defund Planned Parenthood" rally.
Texas Senator and presidental candidate, Ted Cruz at a “defund Planned Parenthood” rally.

No matter what age or how much money you have you should be able to make informed, independent decisions about health, sex and family planning. Taking that away from anyone is violating their constitutional rights. The states that do provide funding provide the organization with 500 million dollars each year.

What many don’t realize, is this money goes to only 3% of the service that this whole political debate is about; abortions. The money used for abortions comes from private’s donors as well as fees, which isn’t the only service Planned Parenthood provides. These pro-life, anti-planned parenthood supporters need to realize what they are trying to stop. All they seem to be focusing on protecting is the life of fetus rather than the life of a living, walking, breathing grown woman. The organization really is putting 9% of this government funded money to cancer screening and prevention, 42% goes to STD testing and treatment as well as 34% to contraception. Many of these services young and underprivileged depend Planned Parenthood to be provided with these extremely important services.

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Although Planned Parenthood receives money from private donors, it still needs government funding, which makes up for 41% of its revenue, the largest source of money they receive. That is a tremendous amount to take away from an organization. Many planned parenthoods go out of business because they cannot maintain to upkeep the clinics, raising prices for patients, turning hundreds of women away.

According to Texas’s Policy Evaluation project, which is working to track reproduction health outcomes in Texas, there were dramatic results since Texas was the first to defund Planned Parenthood in 2011. There was a 35% drop in claims for birth control implants and pills because many couldn’t afford it anymore. This then created an increase in births by 27%, Showing disadvantaged woman were struggling to get the contraceptive care they really need. Many politicians claim they are putting this money instead towards to health care providers and give lists of other possible places to visit. Indiana even offered a woman’s prison as an alternative…But just from looking at the results in Texas it clearly isn’t true. These health care providers, are out of reach from the impoverished communities that need it the most.

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Planned Parenthood is extremely beneficial for young girls as well. Because of the unrealistic and ineffective “Chasity education programs” that were passed in 1981, Many schools provide lessons of abstinence instead of teaching kids how to be safe about their own bodies and sexual behavior. Planned Parenthood provides a safe and comforting place, where these young women can go to, to educate themselves about protection and safety as well as a place to go to get help if they cannot afford it or speak to a parent about it. It is commonly warned that denying these young woman good information about their own bodies and confidential health care services could have tragic consequences. For example, in 1988, Reckie Bell, a 17-year-old became pregnant and being too afraid to tell her parents and not being able to afford a legal abortion, died from an illegal one. Unfortunately, this was not the only time something like this happened to a young, afraid and vulnerable teen.

As a young woman, I feel safe knowing if I or any loved one is ever in a situation like pregnancy, the need to be tested for an std or cancer or even just a place to go to talk or ask questions, my state provides us with an organization that we can go to for it all. I believe every woman should be able to feel this way.

With the government being Planned Parenthoods largest source of money, the government needs to keep finding this organization so they can continue to help educate, care and prevent pregnancies for woman of any age, color or income as well as give them the choice to what they want to do to their bodies.

 

 

Works Cited:

“A Warning To Both Parties On Planned Parenthood And Abortion.” NPR. NPR, n.d. Web. 25 Apr. 2016.

Denbow, Jennifer M. “Abortion As Genocide: Race, Agency, And Nation In Prenatal Nondiscrimination Bans.” Signs: Journal Of Women In Culture & Society 41.3 (2016): 603-626. LGBT Life with Full Text. Web. 25 Apr. 2016.

Laguens, Dawn. “Planned Parenthood And The Next Generation Of Feminist Activists.” Feminist Studies 39.1 (2013): 187-191. LGBT Life with Full Text. Web. 25 Apr. 2016.

Netborn, Deborah. “After Texas Stopped Funding Planned Parenthood, Low-income Women Had More Babies.” Los Angeles Times. Los Angeles Times, n.d. Web. 25 Apr. 2016.

“Planned Parenthood | Official Site.” Planned Parenthood | Official Site. N.p., n.d. Web. 25 Apr. 2016.

Ramelb, Christine. Valparaiso University Law Review: Public Health Care Funding: The Battle Over Planned Parenthood. 47 Vol. Valparaiso University School of Law, 01/01/2013. Web. 9 Mar. 2016.

Stevenson, Amanda J., M.A, Imelda M. Flores, Ph.D, and Richard L. Allegeyer, Ph.D. “Effect of Removal of Planned Parenthood from the Texas Women’s Health Program — NEJM.” New England Journal of Medicine. The New England Journal of Medicine, Mar.-Apr. 2013. Web. 25 Apr. 2016.

Reflection: 
 [1]  How well does the title provocatively focus the reader’s attention, as well as the lede? Is it thoughtful, creative, clever? Does it lead the reader into the text and provide some insight into the issue?
                  I found my title,  “Planned Parenthood and the Importance of government funding for women’s health” to be informational and really is specific in the way of what the article will truly write about but its not in a clever or creative way. I had trouble thinking of a way of writing a fun title for such a serious topic.
[2]  How well does the introductory section of the article invite the reader into the paper, as well as offer up exigency?  How does it locate a problem or controversy within a context that provides background and rationale?
  1.                   I found the introduction to be strong because it offers exigency through mentioning what is so popular right now- the presidential race and the issues are candidates are speaking about, one being planned parenthood. I bring up which sides there are in the controversy and why. Looking back, I wish I gave a little more information on the actual organization in the beginning like even something like, “a health care provider and educator”.[3] How well does the writer offer up a strong ‘idea’ that requires analysis to support and evolve it, as well as offers some point about the significance of evidence that would not have been immediately obvious to readers.?

    I believe I as a writer, was able to back up my opinion with lots of information and evidence for why Planned Parenthood is so important. I dug deeper to find accurate information on what people think planned parenthood provides and gave examples of how tragedy can occur without it.

    [4] How well does the writer show clarity of thought; uniqueness of presentation; evidence of style; and historicized topics?

    I believe I broke up my article in a way that was easy to comprehend and was clearly written. I do think I could of pushed myself to create a more unqiue presentation not only with the images I used but the way I wrote the article. It was informational and straight forward but not very interesting or fun to read, which is something I believe every aticle should be.

    [5]  How well does the writer recognize that a NYTs Magazine audience will challenge ideas that are overgeneralized or underdeveloped or poorly explained? (that is, did the writer avoid cliché and vagueness or address points/issues readers are likely to have?)  How well did the writer decide about how to develop, sequence, and organize material?

    Again, I feel like I clearly organized the material and was able to break it up in a way that makes it easy to read and take in. I think I could of gone a little deeper on information about the side trying to defund Planned Parenthood and give more information on why they want to.

    [6]  How well does the writer research a controversy, develop a persuasive stance, utilize research about the topic,  and join the ‘debate’ by making an argument of importance?

    I think because I was writing about a topic I was passionate about, I was excited to research it and you can pick up on that in my article. I believe I shared my opinion strongly but not enough that it was in your face. I was able to back my opionon up with research and evidence to support it.

    [7]  How well does the writer meet or exceed research expectations of assignment requirements (6 appropriate secondary sources, 1 visual source, (or more) and primary research? ).

    I felt like I had lots of research that I was able to take from my Ted Talk and find even further resources, so I exceeded my requirements for information. Having the librarian come in helped me find what I needed easily from the librarys sources. I used over 3 images in my article that I believe were strong enough to support my statements.

    [8]  How well does the writer integrate secondary and primary sources (that support and complicate the topic) effectively into the text, introducing and contextualizing them, and “conversing” (i.e. no drop-quoting) in ways that

    I believe I integrated my secondary and primary sources smoothly into my article. For example, I was able to show accuracy through writing about the Texas Policy Evalution project and using the statistics found in their research, in my own article.

    [9 How well does the writer persuade an audience to consider claims made from a particular position of authority on which you have built your research?  How strong and effective is the writer’s use of rhetorical tools (ethos, logos, pathos)?

    I believe my article made people realize the importance of planned parenthood and maybe if not agree defintly rethink what they thought about the organization a little. My goal was to open peoples mind to the fact that Planned Parenthood is more than just a place that preform abortions. I feel like I used ethos  with the research and background information on the organization and pathos when using specific examples of woman like Reckie Bell, and their stories without or with planned parenthood.

    [10] How well does the writer select appropriate, interesting, revealing visual?  Has the writer placed a visual strategically in the essay and provided relevant commentary on and/or analysis of them?  Do the visuals contribute to the essay in meaningful ways (i.e. would the essay be affected if the writer took the visual away)?

    I believe the visuals I chose support my statements but I think I could of chose more interest and thought provoking images. I only have a caption under one of the photos that works but really only mentions the specifics of the photo.

    [11] How well does the writer show development of final article using various drafts, in-class peer editing and workshops, and/or teacher comments?

    I found the workshops and peer editing to be very helpful, which I always do. I think if we had alittle more time for draft work I wouldn’t of felt so rushed.  Because I felt a little rushed I ended up falling a little behind on work which ended up hurting my work. I feel like If we had a little more time to work on these articles mine could have been stronger.

    [12]  How well does the writer use hyperlinks—are they effective/appropriate?

    I used hyperlinks only a few times through the article but when I did I found them necessary. For example, I used hyperlinks to take you to certain research articles, or a hyperlink to the Planned Parenthood website to get more information straight from the organization.

    [13]  How well did the writer edit for grammar, style, and usage effectively? Does the writer’s attention to sentence level issues help him/her establish authority or credibility on the issue?

    I believe my attention to grammar was effective but I do believe If I was able to go back I could push myself further in descriptive sentences. Because of the audience of this article, I did not want to use too many big words are complicated sentences. I wanted the readers to be able to clearly and easily comprehend the message I was trying to get across.

Homeless Families in America. How do we take care of our most valuable and vulnerable assets.

Homeless Families in America.

How do we take care of our most valuable and vulnerable assets.

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For Kayla, 12, and her brothers, Kyle and Mitch ages 7 and 3, respectively, it happened after their mother had been in a car accident. Katherine, a single mother of three, living from pay check to pay check and sometimes having to take on two jobs to support the family, she was doing her best to raise her children as kind, understanding, and compassionate. Knowing her situation was volatile, she always took the opportunity to use it as a teachable moment, to show her kids that they could get through anything as long as they work hard and stick together. Then came the car accident. By no fault of her own, the course of her and the children’s life would be changed instantly and without warning due to an unaware driver running a red light and demolishing the car she was already struggling to pay for. A hospital stay and a damaged car beyond repair led to a set of circumstances beyond her control. Loss of a job and a pile of bills with no way to pay them, she barely had enough money to feed her kids let alone the money for bus fair or a babysitter so that she could go out and search for new employment. This downward spiral would soon lead to eviction and homelessness for this family of four. Without the time, money, or resources necessary to combat this overwhelming situation, she was forced to pack what clothes and essentials could fit into four small back packs and find some way to move forward.

As with so many families and children who become the victims of these unforeseen situations that are beyond their control, homelessness is just one unfortunate circumstance away. Serious illness, accident, or a death in the family can put many of these individuals at great risk of not being able to make ends meet when tragedy strikes. Due to the lack of affordable housing, decreasing government supports, combined with an unsteady job market, many of the challenges facing today’s families are forcing them to live a fine line between poverty and homelessness. Those most profoundly affected are the children in these families, the most vulnerable and in need of our help. It is our obligation to help take care of these children, again, the most vulnerable, most promising young lives the future has to offer. Many of these children are being raised by a single mother who is often times the victim of domestic violence, physical, and mental abuse. Left on their own to raise a family, many of these women must take on two or three jobs just to keep a roof over their heads and put food on the table. Without an adequate support system, many are pushed to the brink by the stress and uncertainties caused by living pay check to pay check, meal to meal. All of this is unintentionally passed on to the children who witness and live through these struggles. Many reports show that the children who experience these type of unstable living conditions grow up with post-traumatic stress disorder, depression, chronic health issues as well as mental health issues.

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Although the federal government has taken great effort to bring down the number of chronically homeless individuals and veterans, children and families have not received the same benefits, and their numbers are rising. According to The National Alliance to End Homelessness, 564,708 people were homeless on a given night in 2015. Of that number, 206,286 were people in families, and 358,422 were individuals. About 15% of that population, 83,170, are what’s considered chronically homeless individuals. These chronically homeless individuals are what most of us see as the national face of homelessness, the unwashed, unkept, and foul smelling human beings commonly referred to as bums, or bag-ladies. In realty these homeless are commonly the victims of mental and physical abuse, sufferers of mental illness, and most times at the mercy of an alcohol and/or drug addiction. As a society, we have grown accustomed to the homelessness that surrounds us. Usually with little more than a glance, we walk by them, ignoring their pleas for help or spare change, pretending not to hear them. We pretend not to see them, looking down at our cell phones as if there something important pending or looking away as if something has caught our eye, any reason to not acknowledge or make eye contact with them.

However, amongst the four categories of homeless recognized by the National Alliance to End Homelessness, (Families, Veterans, Chronic, and Youth), it is Youth homelessness, a mostly silent and mostly invisible majority that posts the most surprising and staggering statistics. Of the numbers of homeless children ages 1-17, 51 percent are under the age of six, and the disheartening list goes on. 1 in 45 children, or rather 1.6 million kids will experience homelessness, and nearly 40 percent of the homeless population are under the age of 18. According to Covenant House, a privately funded agency providing food, shelter, and crisis care to homeless and runaway youth, 41% of homeless kids witnessed acts of violence in their homes, 36% indicated that someone in their family used drugs regularly, 19% reported being beaten with an object, 19% reported that they have endured sexual abuse, and 15% reported that someone close to them had been murdered. Of all the research conducted by various homeless advocacy groups, the Covenant House statistics concluded that without decisive action and the allocation of sufficient resources, the nation will fail to reach the stated federal goal of ending family homelessness by 2020, and child homelessness may result in a permanent Third World in America.

So much more can and must be done to help and aid these families and the children who are at great risk of the consequences that accompany an uncertain future. On April 29th over 180 women in five cities across the country slept on the streets with a goal of raising $345,000 for the homeless youth at Covenant House. The third annual Sleep Out: Mothers Edition included moms, grandmothers, aunts, foster moms — women who care about kids and want to make a difference. As stated by Covenant House President Kevin Ryan, “The amazing women participating in this Covenant House Sleep Out are sending a loud and clear message to homeless kids – that we stand with them in their struggles, and celebrate their courage, their resiliency, and their dreams for a better life, what a beautiful message to send as Mother’s Day approaches.”

There is no singular image to portray homelessness in this country. Within the four recognized categories of homelessness, Chronic, Families, Youth, and Veterans, individuals of all ages, geographic areas, occupations, and ethnicities are affected. To think of these homeless individuals as lazy, addicts, or have somehow brought this on themselves or that they choose to be homeless is an absurd and careless notion. This is not a choice and to assume so is ignorant and wrong.

As covenant house has stated, the issues surrounding childhood homelessness reach far beyond just providing hot meals, a warm shower, and a clean bed, there is a wide range of deep-seated psychological, physical, and economic reasons for youth homelessness. The list of unthinkable situations these children are put in are endless. It’s sickening, sad, and heartbreaking to know that these young lives, full of imagination, adventure, and hope are forced to experience the fear, shock, and dismay caused by homelessness and by no will or fault of their own. These homeless families with young children are at a risk different from other homeless and therefore must be treated differently for these needs and risks.

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As for Katherine and her three children, Kayla, Kyle and Mitch, their situation has changed. But one wonders at what unnecessary cost. Through guidance and a strong support system that included help from homeless advocates, complete strangers willing to give of their time, money and energy, Katherine and her children were able to bounce back and return to a life of somewhat relative normalcy. A stable job, new car, and a secure roof over their heads has provided a foundation on which to rebuild from. However, the damage done through this experience has left emotional scars and damage that will not soon heal in the minds of these young children, and these experiences manifest themselves in heartbreaking ways. Kayla, the oldest of her siblings is most definitely experiencing the symptoms of post-traumatic stress disorder and is displaying behavior most associated with a newborn baby. Her brothers, Kyle and Mitch are also showing similar signs of trauma, often waking up in the night screaming and crying due to nightmares, often asking their caring and comforting mother if they are at risk of becoming homeless again, fearing that it all could be taken away once more.

In the spirit of it takes a village, this crisis of family homelessness should be a call to arms for any and all individuals who not only have the time, money, and/or resources to contribute and help, but to those who have the empathy and compassion to make a difference in the lives of those living on the edge of poverty and homelessness, and the children who are the unwitting victims of a social system that contributes to living conditions far beyond the control or understanding of a child. The impact we can all have on a child’s sense of security and well-being is immeasurable. We are all capable of extraordinary behavior, going above and beyond when tragedy befalls our fellow human-beings. However, it is usually a catastrophic event out in the open that grabs us and pushes our instincts to help into action. With this problem, family and childhood homelessness, it is the most vulnerable and at risk members of our society who slip through the cracks and go unnoticed. We can all make a difference in the lives of these children. We are all somebody’s child.

Is Bernie Sanders fit to be President?

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Most people look at Bernie and say that he is too old to be the 45th president. If elected president, he will be the oldest president at 75 years old. The first Google suggestion I received when typing in Bernie Sanders was what was his age. People also point out that before becoming a presidential candidate Sanders was a part of the socialist party before becoming a part of the Democratic Party. While age is important, people shouldn’t count him out of the race for president just because of his age. Like the saying “with age comes wisdom.”

Bernie Sanders has held a seat in political power since 1981 where he became the mayor of Burlington, Vermont. From 1981 till now He has been in some shape or form a part of the government. This alone shows that he has more than enough experience to have what it takes to hold his own in office. Even though his party has changed that does not mean his ideas and experiences changed. He still has the same motives for running as a presidential candidate as a democrat that he had when he was a socialist. With all of his experience he will make a fine president.

Bernie knew he wanted to make a difference politically from a young age. “A guy named Adolf Hitler won an election in 1932. He won an election, and 50 million people died as a result of that election in World War II, including 6 million Jews. So what I learned as a little kid is that politics is, in fact, very important.” Bernie said this quote at a young age. Bernie’s family was affected by the holocausts with many relatives on his father’s side being killed. It was at this moment that Bernie knew that politics where important and he wanted to be a part of them and make a difference for the better and to make sure that something like Hitler being elected does not happen again.

Bernie went to the University of Chicago and studied political science. While at the University of Chicago, Bernie was a part of a few groups/organizations that were involved with politics and political issues. It was through his school that Sanders joined the Socialist party. He was a part of many groups that wanted to change a lot of the laws that affected segregation. In 1962 he led the University of Chicago sit in where a group of students sat outside the university president’s office until he changes the rule that did not allow African American students to live in the same dorm buildings as White students.

Bernie attended the march on Washington in 1963 where Martin Luther King Jr. gave his “I Have a Dream Speech”. In the same year Sanders was arrested in Chicago for protesting with a large group of both White and African American people protesting against segregation. This was just one of the many run ins with the police Sanders has had trying to fight for what he believed to be right.

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In 1980 he ran for mayor of Burlington, Vermont and was elected. Where he served as mayor for 4 terms. In 1990 He was elected as a representative in the House. Sanders served in the House from 1991 until he was elected to the Senate in 2006. He still serves the senate to this day.

All of these past experiences should prove to many people that Bernie is a competent candidate and has many important political  experiences in his past that have shaped who he his and what he stands for. They have also made him into the presidential candidate we all know today.

In an article posted by The Washington Post today, April 25, Sanders admitted that he will fight to the end even though he knows that in the end Hilary will most likely win due to her large lead in front of him. He said he intends to continue fighting in the race until he finds a reason to quit or the last vote is cast.

 

Reflection

  1. The title shows what the article is about and grabs reader’s attention. The lead is creative and clever and draws readers into the text and provides insight with in the first few sentences. Also provides insight into the controversial issue.
  2. The introduction begins with the controversial issue and goes into further detail as the paragraph goes on. Provide enough background information to understand the controversial topic.
  3. The writer offers a strong idea and strong evidence that helps the writers point.
  4. The writer shows clarity of thought and evidence of style in their writing.
  5. The writer knows that New York Times readers will challenge ideas or underdeveloped ideas so they tried to be as clear as possible and explain everything.
  6. The controversy is well researched and is developed into a persuasive argument. Much research has been done into topic.
  7. The writer only used a total of four sources for their assignment.
  8. The sources are brought up in the assignment by creating a hyperlink to the source in the sentence where the source is being used.
  9. The writer does a good job persuading the reader about their topic and claims. The writer could have included more arguments for and against their topic.
  10. The writer has two pictures in there assignment that shows visually what they are talking about.
  11. The writer shows some improvement on the topic through the peer editing and group editing.
  12. The writer uses hyperlinks to effectively cite where the information they are talking about is from.
  13. There are no grammar issues and the writers attention to sentence structure helps establish the writers authority and credibility.

 

Young, Colored, and in Debt: the Story of Minority Students Across America

Not many people would argue against the belief that education is a vital part of humanity, but some still do not treat it as such. Young minority and non-minority students are being put through an educational system that, admittedly, has many flaws. The most concerning flaw occurs right at the end of these student’s academic careers: college. A student faced with the financial and mental burden that is college will at times make a decision that can impact them financially 15 years later.

Now, the fact that an 18 year old, who has come out of high school with only an introductory economics class under their belt must make a decision worth tens of thousands of dollars is absurd to begin with. For some students, this decision costs months of potential in the job industry, along with any additional debt they acquire. This opportunity has been especially difficult for low income minority students across the country. A Demos analysis on the Federal Reserve’s 2013 Survey of Consumer Finances shows that, on average White high school dropouts have around the same wealth as a Black college graduate. These numbers are what discourage minorities from attending university. They figure that if they’re not going to be making as much money as a White high school dropout, there is no point in going to college. People like Michelle Obama are trying to avoid adoption of this mentality by young minorities. While the Obama Administration has implemented programs to aid minority students, such as the Student Loan Forgiveness Program, it fails to address deeper socio-economic problems faced by minority students who end up dropping out of college.

This article from The Guardian displays a quote by the First Lady telling graduates of Booker T Washington high school, a school mainly comprised of minority students, to pursue an education. It reads “’Do you hear what I’m telling you… Because I’m giving you some insights that a lot of rich kids all over the country – they know this stuff, and I want you to know it, too. Because you have got to go and get your education. You’ve got to.’” While the First Lady’s words certainly seem sincere, all of the numbers point against her arguments.

Not only are minority students making less money on average than their White counterparts, they also have on average more student debt. A Gallup study on student loan disparities between race shows that 50 percent of black college graduates will leave their college with more than $25,000 in student loans. This is significantly more than the 34 percent of white graduates with more than $25,000 in student loans. The choice many minorities must make ends up losing them thousands of dollars either way. One must choose between only achieving a high school degree and living in poverty or going to college and acquiring thousands of dollars in debt.

In addition, this Bloomberg article cites a study done by the University of California, Los Angeles. It has shown that “The average student loan bill for both groups is about $8,000. But that’s half the $16,000 average wealth of black families and only 7 percent of the average $124,000 wealth of white families.” The staggeringly low average black family wealth has made many black students unable to afford such bills, making them default on their loans and sometimes even drop out.

Many minority students have decided to try out the college life, and end up defaulting on the loans they have. This ruins credit scores and can make buying a car, home or even acquiring a job impossible. This situation has plagued many minority households, and adds another figure to the staggering amount of low-wage workers in our country. The outcome of one’s life can start as early as age 17, which is a frightening thought. Many of these minority students come from a household where their parents, while supportive, do not know enough about economics to assist their children.

Not only is the financial aspect of the student loan system sometimes too much to bare for these minority students, but the social aspect as well. There have been many students, much like the person telling their story in this New York Times article that have ended up not being able to afford college due to family issues. The article tells of a minority student in their mid-twenties, reminiscing about their decision to default on their student loans. “By the end of my sophomore year at a small private liberal arts college, my mother and I had taken out a second loan, my father had declared bankruptcy and my parents had divorced.” Familial issues, such as parent’s divorce or the death of a parent are expected to not interfere with student loan payment by the government, which is absurd. The Obama Administration could easily fix this issue by giving more forgiveness to students of families with these issues.

The Obama Administration has been attempting to update the previously ineffective Student Loan Forgiveness Program. While they’re headed in the correct direction with this Program, the fact remains that the average student loan is unnecessarily high. Student loan debt levels have reached $1.35 trillion in the United States alone. Debt has risen by an average of $100 billion per year since 2007. The average student loan debt amount for a person ages 25-35 is $20,000. For some minority graduates, this is higher than their yearly income. While education has been increasing and unemployment has been decreasing, student loan level is getting to a point where college will be simply unaffordable for many households across the country.

We’ve seen politicians like Democratic candidate Bernie Sanders make promises to help the enormous student debt issue. There is no guarantee that Sanders will take office, however. Also, like Mrs. Obama, talk is not only cheap; it’s $20,000 in debt. Every year these political figures wait to make a move to fix the debt problem, $100 billion is taken from these student’s pockets. At the current rate, the student debt level is set to surpass the current mortgage debt level in less than a decade. It is a problem that, many times, in order to acquire the debt that comes with a mortgage, we must first undertake student loan debt. The repercussions of waiting for a politician to fix the student debt problems can range from graduates losing their homes to much worse. The economy and job market will not just wait for someone to come around and fix it, so we have to take action as soon as possible to help students avoid a grim future.

To help these young adults, we must first educate them in financial decisions they will make in the future. From my understanding and experience, economics classes teach these teens about GDP on the macro-economic scale, but fail to stress the importance of decisions the teen will be making in the next 10 years of their lives. Many counselors will tell students to go to college, no matter what kind of debt the student may acquire. This way of thinking does not benefit the student at all. If the student did not achieve as much as they would have liked to academically, I’d would highly advise them to take a semester, or even a year off to gain work experience, and more importantly, wisdom. It would be more beneficial than spending thousands of dollars getting a degree that would land them in the same job position that they would have been in, had they worked instead of going to school.

Writer Gerard Kelly touches on these issues in his piece, It’s Poverty of Ambition, not Student Debt, that’s Keeping Poor Children Away from University. He asserts that “The biggest hurdle poor pupils face is mental, not financial. They think that university isn’t for them. Thanks to the antics of the NUS et al their fears are reinforced.” Students from all around the world are facing this heavy burden, and the stress and anxiety that comes with it. At times, one can sympathize with some students’ decisions to drop out of college, although many are against it.

The Obama Administration has been urging minority students to stay in school, no matter the cost. While they seem to have the best interest of these students in their minds, the current student loan debt situation is a hurtle that some minority students simply cannot overcome. Many of these students end up dropping out of school, 69 percent of them stating student loan debt as the reason. These students end up going against the Obama Administrations intentions, therefore, some action must clearly be taken to make attending school seem more appealing to these students. Either a much needed lowering of tuition across colleges or additional funding from the government must be provided. This same government, by the way, has profited over $1 billion from Federal Student Loan programs in the last decade.

While data shows that minority students are, on average, being affected most negatively by these loans, the government does not discriminate when it comes to taking money from students. This is a problem for minority and non-minority students alike. The only demographics profiting from these outrageous debt levels are the government and the institutions that set these prices. We should not let money restrict our education.

All For the Sake of Convenience

When Hillary Clinton’s Presidential Campaign started to hit its stride a controversy was brought to the attention of voters across the country. As Secretary of State of the United States, Hillary Clinton had her own personal email server set up in her New York home in order to be able to send and receive emails on her personal account which was more convenient than using her government issued email address. Using a private email server made it so much easier for terrorists or hackers to get into the system and gather classified information not only on the United States but other governments across the world as well. Fortunately, as far as we know, no one hacked into the system, however, does that mean that Mrs. Clinton should get a pass?

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Regardless of use, government officials should only be allowed to use government issued and secure devices of communication. This should be upheld to the fullest extent of law to protect the safety of the United States and its allies.

So, why is this such a big issue? Let me answer that question for you.

My favorite word to describe this controversy is: carelessness. As Secretary of State, you are the country’s top diplomat dealing with foreign policy. You are dealing with so much classified information from all over the world that terrorist groups and hackers are drooling at the idea of being able to access the emails of a Secretary of State. What did it all come down to for Hillary Clinton?

Convenience.

Hillary Clinton and her staff’s new office, when she was appointed Secretary of State, was a SCIF which stands for Secure Compartment Information Facility which is used to handle classified information, according to The Observer. Due to the importance of the information being handled in a SCIF, it is required that all phones must be kept out of the facility for security purposes. Clinton and her staff hated that because they wanted to be able to have their personal Blackberry’s with them at all times in order to be able to send and receive emails.

Mrs. Clinton and her staff DID NOT want to use two phones, she said “I opted for convenience to use my personal email account, which was allowed by the State Department, because I thought it would be easier to carry just one device for my work and for my personal emails instead of two.”

This resulted in Hillary Clinton putting in a request to the NSA to build a Blackberry which would allow her to use it in the SCIF instead of having to use a computer terminal (yes, she couldn’t use a regular computer either for some reason). There was only one other person in the country with a special custom-made Blackberry and that was President Barack Obama because not only was the task very expensive but it also required a lot of time and energy to create. As a result, “the NSA was not inclined to provide Secretary Clinton with one of her own simply for her convenience: there had to be clearly demonstrated need,” according to the The Observer. After her request for “convenience” was denied, Hillary Clinton decided to have her own private server created.

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When news broke out about Hillary using a private server during her term as Secretary of State, the State Department requested that she turn her email’s over and the private server, under the Freedom of Information Act, to see if any government information was released that could put the government and country at risk. Hillary Clinton has consistently maintained her position that she did not do anything wrong by using this email server and that she did not send or receive classified information at the time. And she did in fact turn over “most” of her emails…more than 5 months after they were requested. Clinton’s lawyers ended up turning over around 55,000 emails all of which contained 1,340 emails which were ruled as classified and 22 emails that were given the highest classification level of Top Secret by the FBI.

Many people who support Hillary Clinton argue that the only reason that this is such a big issue is because she is the Democratic favorite to win the nominee and because she is poised to make a strong run for the White House. While others believe that she is just being used as an example while other government officials have also used their own personal email accounts.

As a matter of fact, Secretary of Defense Ash Carter did use his own personal email account for work and when he was asked to turn over all of his emails (which he did right away), not one email contained any sort of classified information, according to the New York Post.

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The biggest difference between other government officials who use their own email and Hillary Clinton is how they handled it. It only added to the controversy when Hillary Clinton took so long to release her emails. 5 months! The longer she waited the more questions were being asked especially since she was the only one with access to those emails and there is a strong possibility that emails could have been deleted.

According to The Observer, this caused one former NSA official to ask, “What did she not want put on a government system, where security people might see it?”

Like mentioned previously, the most dubious part of this controversy is the way classified information was handled. It is a criminal law to send and receive classified information improperly, or in this case, on a private server where information can leak and people who should not have certain information end up gaining access to it. One particular email on Hillary’s server has raised some questions because of the information included and who had access to that information. This is also an example of how classified information can get into the wrong hands.

The email was sent on June 8, 2011 to Hillary Clinton by a close Clinton adviser named Sidney Blumenthal. The email which he sent was an “amazingly detailed assessment of events in Sudan, specifically a coup being plotted by top generals in that war-torn country,” according to the Observer.

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In addition, “Mr. Blumenthal’s information came from a top-ranking source with direct access to Sudan’s top military and intelligence officials, and recounted a high-level meeting that had taken place only 24 hours before.”

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How did Mr. Blumenthal, a man who has not worked for the government in over a decade, have information that  came from a top ranking source “with direct access to Sudan’s top military and intelligence officials?” The email was also very much written like an NSA report and NSA officials have even come out and said that should be investigated as well.

“To get this this secret information, place it in a decently written assessment with proper espionage verbiage, and pass it all back to Washington, D.C., inside 24 hours. That would be a feat even for the CIA, which has stations and officers all over Africa,” writes John Schindler.

I mentioned that Mr. Blumenthal was a Clinton advisor, he did not work in her department nor did he hold any position whatsoever in the U.S. government at the time the email was sent.  More ironically, the last time Sid Blumenthal was working for the U.S. government was more than 15 years ago when he worked under President Bill Clinton. So, how did he get his hands on this type of information and then place it on Hillary Clinton’s server?

Well, because it was a private email server, we won’t know until the FBI has concluded its criminal investigation.

And with the ability to delete any information from the private server, there could be so much more that we do not know about.

One of the reasons Hillary Clinton should be held accountable is because this put the country at greater risk. This is not a time in the world where we can be careless about classified information for convenience sake. ISIS, and other threats, is growing stronger and stronger and attacks are happening everyday. This type of carelessness and misjudgment can possibly lead to headlines that read:

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Terrorists, hackers and even other countries (cough cough North Korea, Russia and China) are out for us. They would love any secret information that they can get. We never want to see any headlines like that, especially if something could have been prevented.

The United States of America is constantly on the top of someone’s list so for the top United States diplomat, that constantly deals with foreign affairs, to have work related emails containing classified information on a private server…in a regular basement…is completely mind boggling to me. Hillary has come out and said that she did not send or receive any classified information when she clearly has, according to the FBI.

Yes, no one was able to access the information, but this type of set up clearly made it easier for anyone to access it. This is a criminal investigation by the FBI and it should be treated as such because all government officials have the responsibility and duty to protect the citizens of the United States of America and what Hillary Clinton did, had the potential to put this country at risk.

All for convenience?

Politicians should not be focused more about their convenience, but they should rather focus on protecting the welfare of society as a whole because they hold power and that is their duty.

The whole Clinton campaign has changed the way they discuss this controversy. In the beginning of her campaign, Clinton would joke about it at rallies and even the first few debates but as things have gotten more serious and more attention, the whole campaign has changed their tone to a lot more serious and they don’t speak about it as much publicly. Some of Hillary’s closest aides are also now being questioned as part of the investigation, including the man who built the server who was granted immunity.

As this controversy has gained traction, more and more polls are showing that, increasingly, more voters are saying that they do not trust Hillary.

This whole controversy just flat out bothers me. When I find out more and more information about what is really going on and what really happened, not only do I find myself angry and mad, I also find myself dumbfounded. Like, what were you thinking? What kind of thought process was used to make the decision to not use a government issued communication device? All for convenience?

Well Mrs. Clinton, was it worth it?